Wells v. Harvey in light of later research


The Earl Wells article “Once and for all, who was the author of Marvel?” appeared in the “Stan the Man” section of The Comics Journal #181 (October 1995), the one with the exquisite Stan Lee-as-carnival-barker cover by Drew Friedman. In the article, Wells purports to prove Lee was the primary author of Marvel in the 1960s. R.C. Harvey wrote a rebuttal to it a few years later, and Wells edited the article to be reprinted in 2002’s The Comics Journal Library, Volume One: Jack Kirby.

In the article, Wells hits on Kirby’s Fourth World books as the antithesis of ’60s Marvel.

The most significant hero in this series was called Orion, and there had never been anything at all like him in Marvel comics.

…the story was called “The Death-Wish of Terrible Turpin,” a kind of irony that was completely alien to Marvel.

In other words, Kirby’s solo work was distinguished by its darker, more mature qualities.

The style of the various “New Gods” comic books was certainly different — the dialogue was not as smooth, the humor not as funny, nor the characterizations as consistently well-drawn as in the Marvel stories.

Here Wells gives away his age, because his characterization of Kirby’s writing and humour is strictly from the perspective of someone who believed the juvenile versions peddled by Lee were the ultimate in comics. Lee’s idea of humour mocked his and his readers’ participation in comics, a medium he believed was beneath him. Doug Harvey contrasts Kirby’s approach: “Kirby’s writing… is not humorous in the knowing ‘camp’ way that typified so much of comic writing in the wake of his early sixties work (and its translation into TV dialogue on Batman). Instead, Kirby’s writing is riddled with the kind of rollicking unconditional humor that animates the work of Charlie Chaplin or Ornette Coleman: lyrical, sentimental, and revolutionary…”

Lee’s dialogue talked down to what he perceived to be the level of his readers, often while trying to make sense of Kirby’s stories himself; it has aged badly. Kirby had faith in his audience, and his solo work stands beside the best science fiction of any period.

It is becoming clearer now how Kirby viewed the Marvel mythology. I think we can bring his view into sharp focus by considering one of the distinguishing features of the Marvel comics of the 1960s: the death scene. Just one example, drawn by Kirby and credited to Lee as writer, is “Death of a Hero!” which portrays the death of Franklin Storm, the father of two of the team’s members. These are not the kind of scenes that could be added by a dialogue writer to a story that had already been plotted and drawn without them. They were integral parts of the stories and logical culminations of the Marvel theme of heroic sacrifice: when heroes make the ultimate sacrifice, ambivalence and irony are replaced by certainty and honor. The death scenes must have sprung from the heart and mind of the real author of Marvel.

Wells might be dismayed to learn of the existence of documentary evidence attributing the initiation of the Franklin Storm storyline to Kirby. An unused pencil page surfaced, replete with Kirby’s margin notes. (The page was likely dropped from the book because Martin Goodman reduced the page count to 21 pages at the time the issue was published.) In addition, Sue and Johnny’s father wasn’t the virtuous one-dimensional character Wells attributes to Lee: Kirby’s extra page showed him swindling a wealthy widow, caught in the act by his invisible daughter.

In his updated TCJ Library version of the article, Wells adds examples.

Other examples abound throughout the 1960s in Marvel comics credited to Lee as scripter; they are not limited to stories drawn by Kirby. Here are a just a few: The death of the Gargoyle in The Incredible Hulk #1 (May 1962), drawn by Kirby; the death of Betty Brant’s brother in The Amazing Spider-Man #11 (April 1964), drawn by Steve Ditko; the death of Wonder Man in The Avengers #9 (Oct. 1964), drawn by Don Heck; the death of an envious scientist in Fantastic Four #51 (June 1966), drawn by Kirby; and the death of Al Harper in The Silver Surfer #5 (April 1969), drawn by John Buscema.

In his essay, “How Stan Lee Took Credit for ‘This Man… This Monster!’,” Chris Tolworthy addresses the point Wells is making.

TOLWORTHY: The [Wells] essay argues that Kirby did not do “noble death” stories but Lee loved them. Therefore (it argues) this is a sign of Lee’s input.

The idea that Lee added the ending is “special pleading”: that is, all the evidence says Lee did NOT plot, but we say “in this one case he must have done (because the plot point is bad)”. I will now remind readers why the default position must be why Lee did not plot this issue, and then show why the “bad ending” argument fails.

As we have shown time and again in the Marvel Method group, all the evidence points to Lee having MINIMAL control over the plot of the stories. He might say “Bring back Dr Doom” or “lighten up the tone” or “have them fight Spider-Man” but that’s about it. Normally the story conferences take place behind closed doors, but when we do catch a glimpse they always show that Lee had literally no idea what was in the comic until he saw it. This is nowhere more clear than around issue 51.

“This Man… This Monster!” refers not just to Ben, not just to the unnamed scientist, but since issue one it has also referred to Reed. There are three men-monsters in this story, in different trajectories, so we can compare and contrast.

Lee’s editing always made Reed one dimensional. We therefore lose the central conflict of the story: the question of whether Reed should have done this, and whether the price was worth it: the price always paid by his friend. We still get a hint that this story is about Reed: the central tragedy on which the plot hinges is that Reed cannot even recognise his best friend. But most readers will not pick up on the importance of that, because Lee spent the past 50 issues telling everyone that Reed has no faults.

Wells gets to the crux of his argument.

WELLS: It is difficult for me to believe that the same man, an adult professional with years of experience, over the course of only five or so years, could have written with such deep feeling about two such widely divergent themes, on the one hand that great power requires responsibility, sacrifice, and suffering, and on the other that great power is so dangerous that even a philosophy of responsibility, suffering, and sacrifice, can be twisted into an obsession with death, and made to serve ant-life. …if there was one man who was more responsible than any of the others for the personal philosophy displayed in the Marvel comics of the early 1960s, the freshness, humor, and pathos, and things that made them different from anything else being published, that man was Stan Lee.

Tolworthy takes issue with the claim of Lee’s authorship:

TOLWORTHY: The unnamed scientist does not make a noble sacrifice: he simply pays the price for his own crime (of letting the rope break instead of saving Reed). His role is important, to show that inside people can be decent. But it is something ANYBODY should do. His role is to be an everyman: he struggles, he follows the tide of history, he has bad inside him, but also good. He is a human being, nothing more or less.

In summary, it seems to me that Kirby plotted the whole of FF51, just as he plotted everything else. And Lee edited the dialogue to make the hero one dimensional, just as he always did.

Read Tolworthy’s essay here.

Wells attempts to make the case that Kirby’s 1990 interview claims were exaggerated but understandable, attributable to a growing rage at his treatment at the hands of Marvel.

Kirby’s frustration must have intensified beyond endurance as a result of the mean-spirited and small-minded way that Marvel treated him during the late 1980s on the issue of whether Kirby was entitled to the return of his original artwork. Kirby’s vehemence in defending his important creative role in the history of Marvel Comics, to the point of claiming authorship, is understandable in the face of what must have appeared to Kirby as a deliberate campaign to deny him his due in every sense.

Wells is mistaken that a growing sense of rage led to more extravagant claims. Kirby’s account remained consistent throughout his interview record, from 1968 until his death in 1994. It was Stan Lee’s story that changed by leaps and bounds.

More on the Wells article here.


Robert C. Harvey‘s rebuttal to the Wells article came in the January 1998 issue of The Jack Kirby Collector (#18). This was my own entry point into the discussion, and Harvey’s obvious love for Boys’ Ranch and “Mother Delilah” compelled me to track down a copy of The Art of the Comic Book. Harvey had his own entry in the Kirby volume of the TCJ Library, his retrospective of Kirby’s career reprinted from The Comics Journal #167.


Here are some thoughts on the rebuttal.

Wells examines Jack Kirby’s work on the New Gods series at DC in the early 1970s and compares it to the work he did while at Marvel in the 1960s. So far, Wells is on solid ground. Then he loses his footing; noting that the spirit of the New Gods books is antithetical to the spirit that animates the Marvel books of the previous decade…

…there is ample evidence to support the notion that Kirby viewed heroism differently at different times in his career. In the common parlance of literary criticism, this sort of change is called “growth.”

There is a lot of solid ground/lost footing in various attempts to catalogue the individual contributions at Marvel in the ’60s, so I’ll steal the comparison. So far Harvey is on solid ground, but he then he loses his footing attributing Kirby’s work to Lee.

It’s pretty clear from the testimony quoted in Wells’ article and in other places in the same issue of the Journal that Lee ginned up plot ideas and that Kirby accepted some of them and rejected others as he fleshed out the ideas that Lee rained down upon his head. Overhearing a story-development session from the back seat of a car, John Romita reports…
The pages of art that Kirby turned in transformed Lee’s story ideas into dramatic action; and Lee embellished the action with his verbiage, writing captions and speech balloons that gave the stories a self-deprecating patina.

Lee didn’t “rain down” ideas on Kirby. His ideas when working with Kirby all came after Kirby’s pages, and when they rained down on the pages they often changed what Kirby had submitted.

Romita did not witness a “story-development” session, he was Lee’s chosen audience for a show that was designed to indoctrinate him for the purpose of spreading Lee’s propaganda. (Romita’s concept of Lee’s working methods first came in handy during his 1966 interview in the fanzine Web Spinner: based on no experience of his own he helpfully badmouthed the recently-departed Steve Ditko as “difficult” for Lee to work with.) Steve Sherman had it on good authority (Kirby’s): “According to Jack, they did not have weekly meetings on story.”

Harvey then makes a point that Wells does not.

Kirby was as fond of his audience as he was of drawing and storytelling. Any comic book reader who spent any time with him can testify to that. And Marvel’s success with the college crowd (slightly older readers than he’d been working for prior to that time) doubtless made Kirby more aware of the blighting impact of Vietnam on American youth than he had been before during either of the other conflicts he’d witnessed. His readers were being marched off to a war they despised for reasons that seemed wholly irrelevant. Kirby could scarcely have ignored what was going on around him – and around his readers.

Jack Kirby genuinely cared for his readers. When Stan Lee addressed what he perceived as an adult audience (in his Oui interview and Quest article) he expressed contempt for the “drooling juveniles and semicretins” who comprised his young readership, characterizing them as something to be manipulated. The constant theme through all versions of his fictitious biography is the struggle to escape the field to which the efforts of his cousin-in-law and his own lack of ambition had permanently consigned him.

So how did Kirby get from the Marvel ambiance to the New Gods ambiance? The latter shows that Kirby, once a believer in the redemptive and triumphant power of heroism, had lost his faith -or, rather, had tempered it with an almost cynical realism. He did what all of us did as we progressed from World War II through the Korean War to Vietnam.

Kirby’s entire career can be seen as a progression. I’ve indicated some of that progression here; in my book, I indicate other aspects of it. For now, however, it is perhaps enough to say that if we view the creative artist as a growing, developing consciousness, we can easily explain what Wells finds so inexplicable: The conflicting views of heroism and human nature found in the Marvel Universe and in the New Gods universe.

What Wells and Harvey both miss is that Kirby was the initial writer of these books, and Lee had the final say through dialogue. This is the great insight we get from the very existence of thousands of pages of Kirby’s pencilled margin notes.


In his essay “Fantastic Fascism?” (International Journal of Comic Art Vol. 5, No. 1, Spring 2003), Craig Fischer takes on accusations of fascism in Jack Kirby’s work from Art Spiegelman and Klaus Theweleit. Spiegelman is sadly entitled to his opinion of Kirby, and I’m grateful for anyone who will take him to task for it.

Fischer’s solid ground is his use of Kirby’s Fourth World to refute the fascism charge.

At the heart of such unresolved questions is the work of Jack Kirby, the most prolific and influential artist in the history of American mainstream comic books… The facts of Kirby’s own life are an heroic refutation of fascism; as Jerry Boyd points out, “Kirby had been a soldier in WWU serving in General George Patton’s Third Army which became world-renowned for its crushing breakthroughs on the German defenses after D-Day. Like any other infantryman, he witnessed firsthand the horrors of war, and had seen or learned afterwards the terrors the S.S. had kept hidden; The extermination camps” (Boyd, 1998:5). Boyd further argues that Kirby’s portrayal of Apokolips in the “Fourth World” comics is a thinly-veiled fictionalization of the evils of Nazi Germany, with Hitler morphing into Kirby’s arch-villain Darkseid. Although Boyd sees a consistent anti-Nazi stance in both the man and the artist, others discern fascism in Kirby’s superhero comics… Spiegelman clearly sees Fascist tendencies in Kirby’s art, then, while Theweleit only obliquely hints at connections between Kirby’s treatment of mythic heroism and the Fascist Zeitgeist.

While describing the difference between disparate takes on Doctor Doom’s motivation by Kirby and Lee, Fischer invokes Mike Gartland.

According to Mazzucchelli [David, in his TCJ interview], Lee’s dialogue posits that Doom is ultimately corrupted by a catastrophic accident, while Kirby attributes Doom’s evil to a little scratch. Misunderstandings like this between Lee and Kirby were common; Mike Gartland, in his “Failure to Communicate” columns in The Jack Kirby Collector, charts in scholarly detail the disjunctions between Kirby’s. drawings — and the written suggestions he would write in the margins of his pencilled pages — and the captions and word balloons Lee would add after Kirby laid out the visual narrative.’

Gartland did comics scholarship a great service, bringing Kirby’s margin notes to public attention and highlighting Lee’s departures from the story told by the pages as he received them. Gartland has since made it clear that despite the evidence he amassed of Lee’s meddling, he declines to make a value judgment on Lee’s “contribution” and considers the Kirby-Lee product superior to Kirby’s solo endeavours. Hopefully the end to his series came by his choice, not as a result of being shouted down by the dominant Kirby-Lee contingent of TwoMorrows’ readership.

Fischer finds his shaky ground when he introduces the Fantastic Four to the argument.

The Freikorps soldiers wrote memoirs where their nameless wives were mentioned for maybe a sentence or two, while in their 102-issue run on The Fantastic Four, Kirby and Stan Lee devoted more time to domestic matters (the courtship, wedding and marriage of Reed and Sue Richards, the birth of their son Franklin) than any other superhero creators before. or since. Of course, Lee and Kirby’s treatment of the Reed-Sue relationship was often embarrassingly reliant on gender stereotypes, with Sue fretting about “girlie” concerns while Reed works on one of his massive machines… Yet the very fact that Lee and Kirby give Sue a voice — albeit a “feminine,” weak voice — within the pages of the Fantastic Four is an acknowledgment of female subjectivity that was never possible in the memoirs and stories of the Freikorps.

Fischer missed it, and even Gartland, with all the evidence in front of him, never addressed Lee’s sexism. Kate Willaert created a blog out of the blatant examples. Here’s another passage from Chris Tolworthy’s FF 51 analysis:

TOLWORTHY: The simplest way to see Lee’s edits is to read the stories without dialogue. The “Kirby Without Words” blog shows that the art and dialogue are frequently in conflict.

The clearest and most common conflict is sexism (check the blog for examples). Lee always wanted the male hero to be THE MALE HERO. So:

  • When a woman did something, Lee changed the dialogue to give credit to the man.
  • When the male hero was controlled by a villain, Lee changed the dialogue so the male hero was NOT being controlled.
  • When the male hero did something morally ambiguous (especially if it might offend the Comics Code) Lee changed the dialogue to make it safer.

The number one example is Reed Richards, Mr Fantastic. By editing out his moral conflicts, Lee removed the heart and soul of the Fantastic Four.

Daniel Greenberg and others have provided many examples in the Marvel Method group of Lee abdicating his moral leadership, which his young charges seem to hold out as one of his most endearing qualities. Tom Scioli recently used an example in his YouTube read-through of Thor #139; it had been highlighted by Patrick Ford in May of last year.

FORD: Even in Lee’s dialogue Thor is going to die. In Kirby’s version Thor is crying because daddy took away his hot rod and Sif is disgusted because Thor is acting like a big baby. What Lee did was turn it into some kind of noble self sacrifice with Sif blaming mean old Odin.

The idea that in the ’60s the public had no stomach for a strong women character is ridiculous. There are many old films, TV shows, books, etc. with strong women characters which were and remain popular. Lee had some weird issue with women. It’s very obvious.

Lee’s sexism is excused as being of its time. That would likely be the end of the discussion if it hadn’t been Jack Kirby’s accomplishments Lee chose to erase; instead, Lee’s behaviour gets to be held to a higher standard. Recent Marvel Method posts show positive portrayals in Kirby’s 1950s work of young women in STEM, and the female member of a team saving the day (as Kirby was often derailed trying to do with Sue Storm).

The Kirby-Lee dichotomy on female characters can be reduced to their views on their life partners. Kirby saw Roz as his powerful equal, and the inspiration for the character of Barda; Lee used his wife and daughter’s insatiable spending habits as an excuse for a life of wage and credit theft.

Fischer returns the discussion to solid footing again with Kirby’s solo work.

FISCHER: And this female voice grows stronger in Kirby’s Fourth World comics. Although Spiegelman claims that Kirby’s work is a “celebration of the physicality of the human body at the expense of the intellect,” a comic like Mister Miracle strikes a balance between physicality and intellect. Mister Miracle has two central characters, escape artist Scott Free (who represents intelligence and resourcefulness) and Big Barda (who, surprisingly for a superheroine, represents athleticism and physical power), and Kirby brings body and mind together as Scott and Barda fall in love, get married, and thrive in a relationship based on equal participation in the struggle against Darkseid.

In his footnotes, Fischer cites the Wells essay as “another fine reading of ‘The Glory Boat!'”

WELLS: But this seems to be a very negative world-view from the man who helped breathe life into Captain America. Kirby is by nature an optimist, powerfully drawn to expressions of life affirmation. And I think there is a bright glimpse of hope among the fatalistic gloom, in a scene from one of Kirby’s best stories, “The Glory Boat.”

Kirby is not the author of Marvel…

On a closer reading, this might be the only flaw in Wells’ argument. Kirby is the author of the Marvel stories in their initial form, as they were intended. Lee can be designated the author of the final product, though he achieved that distinction by dismantling the well-constructed stories that were handed to him. He was the great differentiator of the Marvel work from Kirby’s Fourth World.

…but [Kirby] is the author of a body of work that in many ways is equally impressive… Indeed, far from being finished, Kirby’s story of the superhero as portrayed in the New Gods stories — a sometimes crudely fashioned but also richly imaginative, bitterly ironic, usually profound, and doom-haunted creative ore that was veined with the gold of a vision of ultimate transcendence — will always seem to be just beginning. Perhaps that is because his stories reflect the ultimate and happiest irony, that life must be an unending process of change, of new beginnings, if what we most cherish is to survive.

While reading the lengthy passages about the Fourth World books, it becomes apparent that the Wells article contains a thorough and detailed appreciation of  the series by someone who understood and enjoyed it. In comparison, the juvenile, superficial, unsupported statements in favour of Lee’s “writing” superiority suggest a more devious approach. It’s as though Earl Wells himself wrote his article in two voices: shallow versus deep, flippant versus profound, Lee’s voice compared with Kirby’s. In this sense, he has the difference nailed.

R.C. Harvey saw Jack Kirby’s career from a broad perspective stretching back to the origins of the medium, but the other articles cited here (and comics scholarship in general) have a superhero fixation. Kirby knew that superheroes would have their time, and that they were back in season in 1958. Stan Lee’s only evident decade of creative success came while his ghostwriters and ghost-creators were Kirby, Ditko, and Wood, a decade that also saw superhero fanatic Roy Thomas being added to the Marvel roster. These two things combined to ensure that the season would never end: superheroes are forever, long after having outlived their usefulness. In 1970, Kirby shook their dust off his feet and returned to his science fiction roots before again branching out into his other preferred genres of mystery, romance, and adventure.

For a further look at how the evidence confirms Kirby’s account, check out, According to Jack Kirby and Kirby at Marvel, here. Kirby at Marvel is also available at Amazon.

Larry Lieber, time traveller

The impossible writing credits of Stan Lee’s younger brother

In 1995, Stan Lee and his crack team of lawyer/ghostwriters created a character for the benefit of Will Murray and his “corrective”article in Comics Scene. The character was a version of Lee’s younger brother Larry Lieber who would travel through time and write scripts for those pesky uncredited and unsigned Jack Kirby “monster” stories. Kirby was conveniently dead at the time and no one else would raise any objections. Lieber, forced to play himself in the role, was timid and malleable, susceptible to threats by his brother to take away his only source of income, the Marvel newspaper strips. He was only too willing to testify to Lee’s false narrative.

Roy Thomas was still out in the cold until at least 1997, when he stated for his Kirby Collector interview with Jim Amash that Lee would never claim he hadn’t spoken to Kirby before writing the FF #1 “outline.” The year after that misstep, Thomas was given a chance to redeem himself using his Alter Ego bully pulpit and a Comic Book Artist “interview” under the same cover.

It was in that interview, a “conversation” with Lee that Thomas made it clear that he wasn’t above leading the witness, or in fact telling Lee what “facts” had been agreed upon in their new narrative. Since Thomas was new to the operation, he could be forgiven for not having a full grasp of all the details himself. He seemed unaware Lieber had been added to the plot, upgraded to “Writer for All of Kirby’s Work That Lee Hadn’t Signed.” Instead, Thomas mentioned Lieber in passing: “in these minor stories that you mostly wrote, along with Larry Lieber…” (Neither Lee nor Lieber had written a [choose your preferred adjective] thing for Kirby before the superhero credits.)

What was the basis of Team Lee’s strategy? Lee and his henchmen (would Arthur Lieberman object to being called Lee’s henchman?) aimed to discredit Kirby after his 1990 Comics Journal interview. The specific target was this response:

GROTH: And you two collaborated on all the monster stories?

KIRBY: Stan Lee and I never collaborated on anything! I’ve never seen Stan Lee write anything. I used to write the stories just like I always did.

After claiming that same writing credit for himself for over two decades, Lee suddenly relinquished the title to his brother to try to counter what Kirby had said and written in the years just prior to his death.

The Interview

The year after the “conversation,” Thomas was given the opportunity to make up for his oversight with his own comprehensive interview of Lieber. In it, he gives a master class in writing false history with his questions and captions. He begins by trying to get Lieber to talk about his first credited work, a pencilled story in 1951 (he was credited for pencils on a story he signed in All True Crime #44, cover dated May). Lieber would have none of it, not even a few questions later when Thomas repeated the question: he wanted to talk about his launch into writing, and 1958 sounded like a good place to start. Here are some excerpts (comments in bold).

RT [Roy Thomas]: In ’50-’51, would you have been drawing or writing or both?

LIEBER: The writing I didn’t do. When I came out after the service, I went to the Art Students’ League, and I still wanted to be an artist and do comics, but I had in mind to eventually become an illustrator. I was drawing, but I was slow. I didn’t have the skill to draw quickly, and in 1958 I had to earn a living. And Stan, at the time — well, things were bad. He had almost nobody working for him.

RT: That was right after the American News collapse, when Goodman’s comics almost closed down for about a year.

LIEBER: Wait a minute—I did do some comics then. I did some romance comics. I was penciling them. And there was a point where I did writing, because I remember Stan saying to me, “You write romances really well,” so I must have written some. In 1958 Stan said he wanted somebody to help him write, and he had nobody then; he was doing it all himself. I said, “I’m really not a writer.” He said, “Oh, I’ve read your letters.” So I probably wrote the romances sometime after that.

“I probably wrote…” Prior to Marvel opening the credit vault to him recently and the Grand Comics Database (GCD, comics.org) following suit based on no evidence whatsoever, Lieber had a pencils-only credit on a further eight stories in the 1950s.

RT: When the comics were just getting started up again.

LIEBER: Well, they were putting out… let’s see… Journey into Mystery… Tales to Astonish…. I remember Jack Kirby was usually doing the lead story, and Don Heck was there. Ditko used to do the story at the end of the books, and later he and Stan did Amazing Adult Fantasy. At the time I had a room in Tudor City, and I was writing stories for Jack to draw. Jack was so fast, and I was learning to write. You can appreciate this, I’m sure: I didn’t really know how, and Stan was giving me a writing course!
[…]
I remember that Kirby was so fast he could draw faster than I was writing! Stan would say to me, “Jack needs another script!”

“Jack needs another script…” The entire account is ludicrous on its face, but the suggestion that Kirby needed a script from Lee or Lieber is the biggest lie in the story. “I’m of the mind that Jack needed no one to ‘write’ these pedestrian monster stories.”—Michael J Vassallo

RT: You mentioned earlier that Stan would say to you, “Jack needs a story now.” Did you plot some of those lead monster stories, as well?

LIEBER: No. Stan made up the plot, and then he’d give it to me, and I’d write the script.

RT: Would Jack have already penciled the story?

LIEBER: No. These were all scripts in advance.

“…all scripts in advance.” This sad little detail is the downfall of Lieber’s entire claim.

RT: So this wasn’t “Marvel style” yet? I asked Stan recently just how that style started. He felt maybe Fantastic Four #1 was the start of it, but I wondered if, by 1961 and before, he was already doing some things plots-in-advance for Jack and others.

LIEBER: No, I think it started with Fantastic Four; or around the time he did the super-heroes.

RT: So you’d turn Stan’s plots into a full script for Jack or whoever?

LIEBER: Or for Don Heck, or someone. Stan liked writing his own stories for Ditko. Jack I always had to send a full script to.

“Jack I always had to send a full script to.” Of all of the “artists”  who needed him to write for them, Lieber believed Kirby was the neediest because his brother kept him completely insulated from reality.

RT: Didn’t you make up “Don Blake” when you scripted the first Thor story?

LIEBER: I probably did. I wrote a full script and sent it off to Jack.

“I probably did.” Lieber will become more certain of the false words put in his mouth by the interviewer as the years pass.

RT: Your first super-hero work seems to be Thor in Journey into Mystery #83. That came out in the summer of ’62, so you’d have done the script in the Spring, if not before.

LIEBER: One incident I remember with you and me was: I was in the office, and you came in. You’d been poring over Bulfinch Mythology or something, and you said, “Larry, where did you find this ‘uru hammer’ in mythology?” And I said, “Roy, I didn’t find it; I made it up.” And you looked at me like, “Why the hell did you make it up?” You went and found the hammer original name, Mjolnir.

“You went and found…” Again Lieber avoids commenting on Thomas’ false statement, but instead credits him with introducing the correct name for Thor’s hammer. Like many Thomas “creations,” it was something Kirby had done first, in this case in 1942.

RT: By that stage, of course, Stan was doing the plots and Jack was breaking down the stories. Did you realize your career was entering a new phase with all these super-heroes, or was the Thor origin just another story to you?

LIEBER: Thor was just another story. I didn’t think about it at all. Stan said, “I’m trying to make up a character,” and he gave me the plot, and he said, “Why don’t you write the story?”

“I’m trying to make up a character…” Lee’s definition of making up a character was taking possession of that character’s concept pages when Goodman handed them over from the blitz pile submitted by Kirby. To be clear, the character Lee “made up” came to him already made up and with plots.

RT: You were still writing full scripts when you did Thor? I know it’s got to be hard to remember after almost forty years. You wrote the first half dozen or so Thor stories.

LIEBER: I wrote that many? I thought it was just two or three…

“I thought it was just two or three…” In fact it was just two or three, between the introduction of credits and the firing of Lieber as Kirby’s “scripter.”

RT: I never knew that. Stan probably doesn’t remember. I always assumed Jack broke down the stories, because that’s what he was doing for Stan.

LIEBER: Let me put it this way: I wouldn’t swear to it, but I have no recollection of ever writing a story that had already been penciled. A full script is the only way I know how to write.

“…the only way I know how to write.” There’s that damning little detail again, but Lieber will not be dissuaded.

RT: Why would Stan have not written the whole Thor story, which was obviously the thing —if anything was—that was going to sell the magazine, and yet he’d write backup stories drawn by not just Ditko, but by Don Heck, Paul Reinman? I’ve never quite been able to figure that out. Of course, he did plot the Thor story.

LIEBER: He thought of it: The only thing I can think of is that he didn’t know it was going to be that big a feature.

“He thought of it…” Lee did not plot the origin story for Thor and he wasn’t the one who “thought of it.” As with Dr Strange, he was initially betting against the character’s success by delegating the dialogue to his inexperienced brother.

RT: So you and he were continuing the method used in the monster books. The only difference is that, when Stan did start writing full stories himself, he would get Jack or someone, or later Ditko on Spider-Man, to break down the story.

LIEBER: When he saw that the strips had potential, he started writing them, and he was working with Jack. Then, I think he was doing so much that he found it was better—and also, when you’re working with a guy like Jack—Jack was very creative, and wanted to put a lot of things into it. Jack always welcomed doing it, I’d imagine, to some extent… But Jack was so creative, and he probably welcomed it.

“…[Jack] probably welcomed it.” Since the freelancers worked from home and rarely met, Lee was able to control what Lieber and Ditko (and later Thomas and Romita) believed about his working relationship with Kirby, who never welcomed Lee tampering with his stories.

LIEBER: It was easier for Stan, once he had the pictures there, to fit in copy. I remember he’d say, “Oooh, there’s a little space, I can put a word balloon there. This would be good.” It was very easy for him, and it worked beautifully.

Aside: Lieber praises one of Lee’s Principles of Dialoguing Other People’s Work: if there’s “a little space,” fill it with words no matter how superfluous. Sadly, the words didn’t always fit.

My personal favourite is a panel from Thor #144, where Lee turns Kirby’s six-word margin note into 46 words that describe what the reader can already see in the panel. The balloon sprawl that obliterates a chunk of Kirby’s artwork (before Colletta even touches the page) is a mark of the sheer arrogance that gave preeminence to the excess words.

But back to the interview.

The Interview Captions

Thomas captioned the illustrations he chose for the interview after it was conducted, each promoting the false narrative. Notably they indicate that he wasn’t completely on board with all the details.

Caption: Three splashes from Strange Tales #99 (1962)-by Kirby & Ayers, Heck, and Ditko. Only the latter had a writer’s credit for Stan Lee, so the other two were quite probably dialogued by Larry Lieber.

The information presented in the captions is completely false, promoting the Lee/Thomas invented version of history. The uncredited story signed “Kirby + Ayers” was more than “quite probably” written (plotted and dialogued) by Kirby. The “writer’s credit” for Lee was not in fact a credit (four issues before credits were instituted) but a Lee signature, which on a Kirby story would signify nothing more than the pages passing within the reach of Lee’s pen.

Steve Ditko wrote that he never got a script from Lee, so the Ditko story was written by their normal collaboration method, a story conference followed by a “synopsis.” The Don Heck story is still an open question, but some of the work he pencilled was known to be plotted by Kirby. In the first two captions, Thomas proves with his verb choice (“dialogued”) that he doesn’t believe Lieber’s “full scripts” claim.

In the case of Iron Man, Don Heck presented a different version of events to Lieber’s claim: Heck stated that he was read the plot over the phone by Lee. Unbeknownst to Lee, Kirby had left a hidden signature in the form of a recycled Green Arrow plot that, while relaying it to Heck and Lieber, Lee represented as his own.

Other Interviews

In another interview published in 2007, Lieber confided something that he’d never have said to Thomas, that his writing wasn’t earning him a subsistence wage. Not only did big brother keep him living in poverty, but as Abraham Josephine Riesman revealed in True Believer, Lee delighted in rubbing Lieber’s nose in their difference in station. Here Lieber recounts the Tudor City midnight post office story he’d related to Thomas, but with an added detail.

DB [Daniel Best]: Tales To Astonish, Tales Of Suspense…
LL [Larry Lieber]: Yeah, those books right. They were five page stories or seven page stories, he would make up the plot then he would give it to me and I would write it. At the time I was living in a place called Tudor City, in a furnished room. I would write and I wrote stories for Jack Kirby who was so fast; he was drawing faster than I could write. I had to keep feeding him stories; he needed them to earn a living. I think he was living in New Jersey at the time and I’d go to the post office on Saturday night and send the stuff there.

Lieber can perhaps be forgiven for mixing up the details (a courtesy that would never be extended to Kirby); Kirby lived on Long Island not far from Lieber’s own brother. It’s the overall picture that Lieber didn’t seem to grasp: he testified under oath in 2011 that he never mailed a script to “an artist,” but always dealt directly with Lee.

DB: Now for a writer who thought he couldn’t really write, you probably wrote more stories for Jack Kirby than anyone else outside of Stan and probably Joe Simon.
LL: Did I? Amazing. You would know better than I. I did write them for a few years.

“You would know better than I.” Once again, Lieber becomes confused about who is telling the story. The interviewer credits him with writing every Kirby story not signed by Lee rather than the reality, which turns out to be fewer than ten.

In the 1960’s it was a very relaxed atmosphere… I don’t look back on the days with fondness because I barely got a living and I wasn’t the artist that I wanted to be and they just were not happy days for me at all. But that’s what it was.

The following year, Lieber spoke to Danny Fingeroth.

DANNY FINGEROTH: When you would write for Stan, Larry, the credits would say, “plot by Stan Lee, script by Larry Lieber, pencils by whoever.” Take me through how that worked.
LARRY LIEBER: Stan would give me a plot, usually typed. Just a paragraph or so. “Thor does this and that,” and then he’d say, “Now, go home and write me a script.” When I started writing for him in 1958, I hadn’t written before…

DF: So when the credits say that a story was plotted by Stan, and scripted by you, it was never a matter of Stan talking it out with, say, Kirby, and then you getting the pencils and putting the dialogue in?
LL: Oh, no, no, no. It was always a full script done by me. I never worked in what later became known as “the Marvel style…”

But when I was starting off, I started with, what is it, “Grog the Creature” [laughter], you know, those monster things that Jack drew so well.

“…that Jack drew so well.” Lieber is reading word-for-word from Lee’s playbook, minimizing Kirby’s input. “Jack” didn’t just “draw so well.” He plotted, pencilled the story he saw in his head, and scripted it, all before Lee “invented” that story’s plot for Lieber’s benefit.

Lieber’s Deposition

Q[Randi Singer]. And did all of the ideas for stories come from Stan Lee or was there any other way you would get ideas?
A[Lawrence Lieber]. No, they all came from Stan Lee.
Q. Did you ever work on — did you ever get artwork that you would then write the dialogue for, or did you always write the script first?
[…]
A. I always wrote the script.
Q. Who came up with the ideas for the characters that would be in the story?
A. Stan. Well, wait a minute. You say the characters?
Q. Yes.
A. Stan. Yes. Yes. Stan, yes. Yes, sure.

Under oath, Lieber probably should have prefaced this statement with “to the best of my knowledge.” After Lee’s death, Lieber admitted to Riesman that actually he’d had no way of knowing: I ask Larry whether Kirby came up with the initial stories without any input from Stan; he replies, “Maybe he did. See, I was never there when the two of them were there.”

Q. You mentioned that Stan would give you the synopsis or the plot. How? How would he give that to you? Would he —
A. As far as I remember, it was — you mean written. He would give it written to me.
Q. And then after you did the assignment and you — what would happen? Then you would bring it to the office?
A. I would grow to the office with it. Yeah, I would bring it to the office.
Q. And what would happen next?
A. He would go over it and, as I said, if it were in the early years, he might correct or change a line or two. But he always used it. He, he — I never had to, you know, go home and do it again. He was very easy, he was showing me. He said, “Oh, you could have said this. You could have done that,” and he’d make some little corrections. And as time went on, he had fewer to make.
Q. Do you know what would happen to the script after Stan went over it and made whatever changes?
A. Yeah. It would be sent to the artist, I would guess.
Q. Okay.
A. Whether it was, you know, the various artists, yeah.
Q. Did you ever — did you have any contact with the story after you turned it in and made whatever changes?
A. No.
Q. Did you ever have discussions with artists about the stories or the scripts?
A. No.

Under oath, Lieber admits that he had no way of knowing which “artist” would receive his script, that he had no contact with that artist, and that he had no further “contact” with the story. His only interaction was with Lee, who was his only source of information regarding dealings with the other freelancers.

Q. Do you know the story behind the creation of Thor?
A. No.
Q. Do you know who came up with the idea for Thor?
A. No.
Q. Did you ever work on the comic Thor?
A. Yes.
Q. What was your involvement?
A. I got the synopsis, the plot from Stan, and I wrote the first script of Thor. That was it.
Q. And when you say “the script,” that’s what we were talking about before that told panel by panel?
A. Panel by panel and description of it, yes.
Q. Did you see any artwork on Thor before you wrote the script?
A. I don’t recall seeing any. I don’t know.
Q. Do you know who, after you turned in the script, do you know who the artist was that drew Thor?
A. I believe it was Jack Kirby.
Q. Did you have any conversations or any interactions with Jack Kirby about the Thor book?
A. No, not that I recall.

Lieber admits he was in no position to know if or when any his scripts entered the production pipeline.

What did Larry Lieber write?

Kirby’s monster stories

As has been shown in other entries on this blog, Lee plotted stories rarely, if ever. None of Kirby’s monster stories were signed by Lee or plotted by Lee, therefore Lieber never received a Lee plot or synopsis before Kirby drew the story. Therefore, according to Lieber’s own rules, he never actually provided Kirby with a full script in advance. Nearly every page of original art known to still exist has Kirby’s pencilled lettering in the balloons and captions, indicating that Kirby scripted a given story before Lieber would have even heard of it.

The only way Lee did plot for Kirby, sidestepping Lieber’s participation altogether, was by handing over a previously-published story with instructions to reproduce it. He is known to have done this with Kirby, Ditko, Heck, and Reinman. The jury is out on who wrote the original script in each case, but Lee was paid for “writing” each subsequent iteration he signed for no additional work.

Kirby’s last “monster” story was “I Accepted the Deadly Challenge of Zarkorr!” in Tales of Suspense #35, on sale 9 August 1962, the same date as Fantastic Four #8 and four weeks before the first Lieber (or Lee) credit. Did Lieber submit scripts to Lee after the fact for stories that Kirby had already plotted and scripted himself? Unknown, because no such scripts are known to exist. Kirby’s own scripts exist in abundance wherever there’s original art to be examined.

By Larry Lieber’s criteria, how many “monster” stories did he write full script for Kirby? Zero. How many did he dialogue afterwards using the Marvel Method? The original art and Lieber’s own account say zero to that as well. How much of the ever-growing stack of physical evidence justifies a present day blanket writing credit for Larry Lieber on Kirby’s “monster” stories? Zero.

Kirby’s early superhero work

Lee avoided signing the first three Thor stories and the first four Ant-Man stories, therefore they were plotted by Jack Kirby. This means Lieber scripted none of them for Kirby (although he might have been scripting them for practice), nor did he name Henry Pym or Donald Blake.

Steve Ditko commented in an essay that Marvel had the insect-based superhero market sewn up. This suggests that Goodman asked Kirby to change Henry Pym into one, timed to coincide with the introduction of Spider-Man in Amazing Fantasy and further refuting Lee’s Spider-Man creation nonsense. Lee avoided acknowledging Ant-Man until his financial desperation led to the creation of superimposed credits.

By the December cover date, Lee had clued in that he needed his name on everything Kirby was producing regardless of his distaste for the genre: teen humour and westerns would no longer support the lifestyle his wife had come to expect. Kirby had not only become Goodman’s strategist, but also the one he designated to execute the strategy. Rather than remain a spectator, Lee, presumably with Goodman’s blessing, began extracting the kickback that sustained him through the 1960s and launched his luxury car collection.

The Torch story bearing the first Lieber writing credit (Strange Tales #103) was not written full script, was not plotted by Lee, and was not dialogued by Lieber. It contains Kirby’s script in the balloons and captions with some pencilled alterations by Lee that were together turned verbatim into the published text by the letterer. According to the job number, “Prisoner of the 5th Dimension” was pencilled months ahead of its publication schedule. Its writing credits were added at the time of publication, and were completely fraudulent. Of Lieber’s ten actual SCRIPT credits on Kirby’s stories, this one didn’t involve a Lieber script.

The original art to Thor’s origin in Journey Into Mystery #83 was stolen early from Marvel, but the story lacked Lee’s signature and was clearly plotted by Kirby (and he didn’t work from a Lieber script). One of the last pieces of Kirby writing Marvel published before his death was his introduction to Monster Menace #2 (cover dated January 1994, on sale the previous November). In it he mentioned that he recycled his rock creatures from Tales to Astonish #16 as the villains in the Thor origin story. As with FF and The Hulk, Kirby incorporated a monster story into his new superhero book. Did Lieber dialogue the story after the fact? He insists he never just added dialogue, always working full script.

The second Ant-Man story was published the same month as Thor and Spider-Man were launched. Despite the lack of signatures or credits, it is falsely credited to Lee and Lieber by the GCD.

The origin of Ant-Man had come nine months earlier in a Kirby science fiction story, “The Man in the Anthill.” Like his other origin stories, it has its roots in his past work, in the case of a shrinking liquid, dating back to Blue Bolt in 1940. Its original art was recently sold by Heritage, but all that was posted of it on the auction site was the first-page splash. There is no Lee signature, therefore it was not plotted by Lee or scripted by Lieber. It was inked by Dick Ayers so somewhere on the page there will be evidence of a painted-over Kirby/Ayers signature.

With the Thor and Ant-Man stories, time will tell whether Kirby’s script (his pencilled lettering) matches the published lettering. It didn’t occur to Marvel to give either of the Liebers credit in print before 1973 when the enormity set in of a potential Kirby intellectual property claim. In 2017, Lieber began receiving full credit for scripting stories that had nothing to do with him. Lee’s own actions toward other people’s art in the 1960s have guaranteed that the evidence that counters his false narrative will continue to come to light.

In addition to the Kirby stories that contain an explicit Lieber credit, the GCD took the liberty of making that credit retroactive in Tales of Suspense, Tales to Astonish, and Journey Into Mystery back as far as the origins of the Torch, Ant-Man, and Thor, eight additional stories that bear no evidence whatsoever of Lee’s or Lieber’s involvement. They further extended Marvel’s blanket plotting and writing credits to Lee and Lieber on all of Kirby’s monster stories, but at least had the decency to add a question mark in those cases.

Art for the second Thor story, in Journey Into Mystery #84, has been spotted in the wild, and it shows it was written by Kirby with dialogue changes by Lee. The Kirby/Ayers signature was inadvertently left intact but there was no Lee signature: as with Ant-Man, Lee avoided the character until the implications of the move to superheroes set in. For Lieber to have been involved, Lee would have had to receive Kirby’s pages, generate a synopsis for Lieber, and wait for Lieber’s script. Whichever Lieber brother wrote the text that was ultimately used to overwrite Kirby’s pre-existing wording, it was considered inferior to Kirby’s in much of the story.

JIM #84 page 10 panel 3 showing Lee’s balloon on the left (pencilled addition and finished lettering) and Kirby’s rejected dialogue in the top right.

The advent of Lee’s credit line (Plot: Stan Lee; Script: Larry Lieber) initiated on some stories in titles with November or December 1962 cover date, appears to be the start of Lieber’s involvement. But was Lieber involved? His contribution to the Torch story that month has already been shown to be nil despite the SCRIPT credit added long after the fact. Kirby’s reaction (blowing up at Lee, witnessed by Lieber) tells us he objected to having another Lieber brother feeding at the trough for his efforts: when Lee’s wage transference grew to encompass Lieber, Kirby quit the titles where Lieber was being credited, and Lieber was removed, credit and all, from Kirby’s work after ten stories. His career writing or just going through the motions of writing for Kirby started and ended in those same three mystery titles, and finished with February’s cover date.

Lee finally decided to add his name to the fourth Thor story (Journey Into Mystery #86) in the form of the plot credit. Since Kirby’s pencilled lettering appears on the pages along with Lee’s (which entailed a number of dialogue changes), simple math tells us Lee’s modifications were made after the fact. Lieber’s only possible contribution was writing the dialogue that was added by Lee. Lieber insists he only worked full script, so again he has disqualified himself.

JIM #86 page 9 panel 2, showing finished lettering based on both Lee’s pencilled corrections (left) and Kirby’s original script (right).
Iron Man

Lieber’s script credit on the first-published Iron Man story is false: he did not initiate the story with a full script based on Lee’s plot. Don Heck’s version of events credits Lee with conveying the plot over the phone, but the plot Heck wound up illustrating was Kirby’s. Heck was not working from a Lieber script, but from the plot relayed by Lee.

What was Lieber’s part? If he wrote a script in parallel to Heck illustrating the story by the Marvel Method, it also came from Kirby’s plot by way of Lee and wasn’t used by Heck to draw the story. The original art is at large, having been sold at Sotheby’s in 1996 (potentially from Lee’s massive ill-gotten hoard). The only secrets it could yield are whether Heck himself prompted any of the finished dialogue, or if Kirby’s layouts are present.

Conclusion

In Stuf Said,  John Morrow called Jack Kirby’s interview statement, above, “egregious” and used it to draw a false equivalence between Kirby’s claims and Stan Lee’s career of lies. Yet it’s Kirby’s claims that prove more and more accurate as the evidence continues to come to light.

Kirby’s original art plight in the 1980s had captured people’s imagination, but when the truth he’d always told finally began receiving attention with the Comics Journal interview, it was time for Lee to fight back. He struck Kirby where it would hurt the most: his credibility. As Kenn Thomas wrote, “Jack Kirby’s honesty and integrity are not up for debate.”

Lee’s own credibility was unredeemable by that point, with his lies and his feigned lack of awareness acknowledged and laughed off by his followers. That changed in the 1990s when he succeeded in elevating his false narrative above Kirby’s credibility by having it voiced by his unassuming and “trustworthy’ younger brother. By 1999 Larry Lieber’s “impartial” third-hand observations had supplanted Kirby’s claim that “I always wrote my own stories,” and branded Kirby a liar.

The proposed justification for believing Lieber’s reinvented history is that he had no reason to lie. History shows, however, that he had every reason. Drawing the Spider-Man newspaper strip was a source of income for him for over 30 years prior to Lee’s death (as well as the Hulk strip for nearly four years). Lee was contractually paid $125,000 a year to delegate the Spider-Man strip, a privilege bestowed on Lieber and Thomas, among others, that could be taken away at his whim. Court documents show that threatening his livelihood was the mechanism Lee used to coerce Lieber to testify on Marvel’s behalf in the Kirby case. Is there any reason to believe that was the first time Lee used such a threat to exact Lieber’s cooperation?

Did Larry Lieber write scripts? Most assuredly, but at best those scripts were solely for Lee’s consumption. Did a script credit for Lieber entail Lee dictating Kirby plots to him, then using some of his dialogue? It’s plausible Lieber’s scripted words wound up on the page (his description of getting a plot and writing a script over the weekend would fit with Kirby turning in the pages of an early Thor story to Lee on a Friday). It was a rare occurrence, however, and stopped dead with February 1963’s cover date.

Why would Lee need Lieber to write dialogue? As anyone who has heard about the origins of the Marvel Method can tell you, he was too busy to write full scripts for all of his “artists” (no mention of the absence of evidence that Lee ever wrote a full script). But the only thing keeping Lee busy was loafing, and the Marvel Method owed its existence strictly to his determination to award himself the writing pay.

In 1962, once his Marvel Method kickback scheme was in place on two titles for Kirby and one for Ditko, Lee decided to ease off, share the dialoguing load, and take a slightly smaller “plotting” cut on the new characters (still for work that he wasn’t doing). Larry Lieber, Robert Bernstein, Don Rico and others (including uncounted anonymous ghostwriters in every decade) were added to the roster for the simple reason that Stan Lee was the lazy kind of wage thief.

Endnotes

Comics Scene article: In his 1995 article in Comics Scene #52, so intent was Will Murray on getting the scoop on the hidden years of Marvel history that he fell for Lee’s “Lieber wrote” narrative. It was just 11 years after his own investigative report (“I Remember… Vandoom,” Comics Collector #3, Spring 1984) that laid the inspiration for the monster stories at the feet of Kirby, infused with Romanian folk tales at the hands of his mother, and the scripting at Lee’s just because. The latter was also false, as Michael J Vassallo proved in 1999, the year Thomas’ Lieber interview was published. Vassallo showed that Lee didn’t sign a single one of Kirby’s sf/suspense/”giant monster” stories, ever, not in 1956-57 or from 1958 to 1962, when Kirby moved on to superheroes. Vassallo is willing to concede that Lieber may have added dialogue to these stories after the fact, but Lieber’s own testimony says that never happened.

“conversation”: In the heavily-scripted “interview” in Comic Book Artist, Thomas prompted Lee with the correct answers. He confirmed this by claiming of a later interview that Lee remembered something “unprompted,” as if that were the guarantee of authenticity. It foreshadowed Lee being prompted by his handlers nearly two decades later with the spelling of his name.

comprehensive interview: “A Conversation with Artist-Writer Larry Lieber,” Alter Ego Vol 3 #2, Fall 1999. Excerpted here.

further eight stories: After pencilling one science fiction story in 1956, the rest of Lieber’s 1950s credits were comprised of pencils on seven 1957 romance stories, with one in 1958. Was he writing these as well? The GCD, keen to give Lieber scripting credits on everything Kirby based solely on Lieber’s say-so, does not credit him with scripting any of his own romance stories. More information.

Michael J Vassallo: Marvel Method group, 18 August 2023.

in 1942: the Sandman story featuring Thor, Adventure Comics #75 for DC.

published in 2007: Interview conducted by Daniel Best, posted 6 August 2007.

Danny Fingeroth: Interview conducted in January 2008 for an article in Write Now! #18.

Lieber’s deposition: VIDEOTAPED DEPOSITION OF LAWRENCE LIEBER, New York, New York, 7 January 2011. Justia, Dockets & Filings, Second Circuit, New York, New York Southern District Court, Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Filing 102, Exhibit E.

Lieber admitted to Riesman: True Believer: The Rise and Fall of Stan Lee, p 98.

previously-published story: Examples of this practice of Lee’s are detailed in the GCD entry for the Kirby and Ditko stories in  Strange Worlds #1 (the first published for each, post-implosion). Two versions of the same story Kirby drew in “Flying Saucers” had been signed by Lee in 1953, drawn by Fred Kida and Gil Evans. He did not sign Kirby’s, possibly because he was leery of a blow up like the one that finally came in 1962. The story got subsequent remakes at the hands of Ditko and Heck. In the same issue, “Abominable Snowman” by Ditko and “Last Man on Earth” by Heck, neither signed by Lee, would also be covered multiple times by others; the two stories might have Timely or Atlas antecedents also not signed by Lee.

In another occurrence of Lee’s recycling, Kirby redrew his Rawhide Kid origin from scratch for Rawhide Kid #23 using his own script from #17. Both Lee and Kirby were paid again for the story: Kirby did the work twice for the pencilling page rate; Lee was paid as writer both times without writing a word other than “Stan” and “Lee.”

Don Heck’s version: He just called me up and told me he was going to have this character, Iron Man, and he said “Tony Stark,” and the way he wound up where he was over in I guess it would be considered Vietnam. And he’d pitch this synopsis over the phone. We didn’t actually sit down and work out the characters. —Heck to Will Murray, Comics Scene #37, September 1993.

HOWELL: Were you in on the creation of those characters?
HECK: Oh, yeah. I did the first [Iron Man] story, remember–although the costume on Iron Man was Jack Kirby’s… Then Stan calls me up and says, “You’re doing a character called Iron Man.”
HOWELL: yeah, “…and we need a story.”
HECK: That’s about it.
—Heck to Richard Howell and Carol Kalish, Comics Feature #21, November 1982.

Iron Man layouts: A controversy entirely manufactured by Mark Evanier who interviewed both men, declared yes and then no to layouts, and then blamed Kirby for the confusion.

Kenn Thomas: Kirby-L, the Jack Kirby mailing list, 5 September 2009.

Thanks to Patrick Ford and Ferran Delgado for the enhanced Thor panels.

For more information, see my books on Lulu.com. Kirby at Marvel is also available at Amazon.

A KDP edition

Lulu.com is terrific, and I will probably continue to use it as a first resort for future books. For an added outlet, I was persuaded recently to try Amazon and with the book written, all that was required was a little editing.

Selling a paperback with Kindle Direct Publishing, I needed a unique version of the book to qualify for a KDP ISBN. With the Lulu First Edition as a base, I removed some of the more conversational endnotes and added a few citations that have come up since I first went to press. Here are the additions…

Chris Tolworthy, author of The Lost Jack Kirby Stories, on who named Fin Fang Foom:

Tolworthy emailed with further indications regarding the name, including: reiterative locution in Chinese literature and the closely related practice of repeating syllables. The name Fin Fang Foom shows evidence of someone who is aware of and respects Chinese culture. Nobody is claiming that Kirby was actually Chinese of course. But giving that name to a creature with fins, fangs and who shakes the earth (like Fuzanlong, the famous underground dragon who guards wealth, often seen in Chinese parades with a pearl in its mouth) shows creativity, a sense of fun and respect for the original culture. Those are three elements that never appear together in Lee’s writing, but always appear in Kirby’s.
—Chris Tolworthy, private email to the author, 16 May 2023.

Zack Kruse, from his book Mysterious Travelers: Steve Ditko and the Search for a New Liberal Identity, regarding Stan Lee:

Stan Lee has claimed that it was he who first introduced Ditko to [Ayn] Rand, and this version of events goes unchallenged in Blake Bell’s unauthorized Ditko biography Strange and Stranger. However, anyone even mildly familiar with Lee’s self-aggrandizing and hagiographic approach to his own life knows to take this account with more than a grain of salt: maybe it’s true; most likely it’s not, or its credibility is at least strained.

…and on Ditko’s initial portrayal of Dr. Strange as Asian (specifically Tibetan):

Zack Kruse shows that Ditko created Strange to be Asian, with an Asian supporting cast. Dr. Strange’s Anglicized first name, Stephen, was an invention of Stan Lee’s and was not introduced until Strange Tales #115, which presents the character’s origin. Incidentally, this also came at a point when Stan Lee had taken more of an interest and stake in the character’s development… In fact, Lee’s origin for Dr. Strange draws directly from the Dr. Droom origin, but it inverts the race switching, masking Ditko’s Asian Dr. Strange with the white Stephen Strange: a doctor who travels to the mystic East and is then enlisted by an ancient master.

In addition, I was challenged online recently over the “accusation” that John Morrow and Charles Hatfield, against all evidence, cleave to the conventional wisdom that Stan Lee was the primary plotter for Kirby and others in the early 1960s. Where did I get that crazy idea? I added citations:

As the 1960s wore on, Jack was doing more of the work, via the “Marvel Method,” where the “artist” was responsible for much/most/all of the plotting and pacing of the stories, while the “writer” concentrated on the words in the caption boxes and balloons, after the drawn pages were completed and the story totally fleshed out.—John Morrow, Stuf Said.

It would be an exaggeration to credit Kirby with full authorship of his work at Marvel… Lee’s presence was sustaining, generative, and overwhelming; his verbal swagger and editorial cunning were definitive to Marvel, and documentary evidence suggests he was, early on, both Kirby’s guide and active collaborator in envisioning such properties as The Fantastic Four.
Charles Hatfield, Hand of Fire.

A suggestion was made that I add some imagery to illustrate Kirby’s writing. I was reluctant to do this in a greyscale-printed book because most of the adjustment required to expose Kirby’s pencilled lettering is lost.  I attempted it anyway: hopefully as printed enough of the pencils are visible.

The worst image to try to reproduce was the Rawhide Kid #18 caption I used for the cover background. It started as a low res scan from Heritage on which Ferran Delgado performed his magic. It needed to be reduced in size to fit the page and I couldn’t find a good conversion that didn’t result in total pixellation. In the end it seemed to work just to crop it.

I added the images as Appendix I, which can be downloaded here. Appendix II is the collection of quotes (including endnotes) regarding Kirby’s writing that formerly ended the Introduction. If you have the Lulu edition, you already have those.

A new book

Here’s why my new book is important.
The cover background is a colour-adjusted caption from the original art of Rawhide Kid #18 showing Kirby’s pencilled lettering and Simek’s finished lettering, but none of Lee’s. The story was signed by Lee without any input evident.

On 16 June 2023, Disney+ released Stan Lee and called it a documentary. The following day, Neal Kirby responded with a statement suggesting that it was “past time to at least get this one chapter of literary/art history right.”

Mark Evanier had some harsh words based on Neal’s statement: “the notion that [Lee] was the primary creator of those properties is utter…what’s the word I’m looking for here? Oh, I know: Bullshit.”

As usual, Evanier was equivocal: he stands by his policy of giving Lee the benefit of the doubt, paving the way for use of any exclusive (and still secret) Lee interviews to be revealed in his someday Kirby biography. “Stan could sometimes be surprisingly fair in his recollections of who did what when there wasn’t a tape recorder running.” A 1983 example proves that like all of Lee’s marks, Evanier would come away from a conversation with Lee believing he alone was told the truth.

One of the MSM pieces on the Kirby statement took the approach that Lee took credit for the wrong things, but let’s not lose sight of what he did achieve (followed by a laundry list of more dubious claims).  With his second post on the subject, Evanier rose to the occasion by offering some clarifications, including this telling blow: “Stan, when he was surrounded by cameras and being offered money to sign his name, was just about the happiest human being on this planet.”

Abraham Josephine Riesman, author of True Believer, zeroed in on what makes it so difficult for Jack Kirby to get a fair hearing.

For both the executive high priests and the ordinary worshippers of Marvelism, the gnostic gospel of Stanley Martin Lieber amounts to heresy. Only praise and affection are appropriate for their dead god. This kind of hagiography is, of course, akin to many deeply troubling patterns in recent American politics, ones that hardly need to be listed.

David Brin has some recommendations for dealing with this mindset in what he calls the eighth-plus phase of the Civil War. The Lee camp has been permitted to frame the discussion: Kirby’s words aren’t allowed because he’s been discredited by the biggest liar in comics history. Conversely, Lee’s words are not only allowed, they form the totality of their argument.

As Brin recommends, my book takes the facts-and-evidence based approach. This strategy is not to be used with the dyed-in-the-wool cult member (analogous to his “confederacy-idiocracy”), who shouts down the evidence by saying: both men are dead, leave it alone (the mantra of historians everywhere); or we don’t know, we weren’t there (except for Roy Thomas, who really wasn’t there before 1965, but plays the guy who was there in court cases. His own approach is to be utterly ignorant of the evidence and quote Lee).

After the evidence, then the words. The evidence shows Lee to be a charlatan on every count, but bears out Kirby’s claims, so much that it’s Kirby whose accounts should form the basis of Marvel’s real history. It is for this reason alone that it continues to be suppressed.


With this book, I addressed some criticisms of my first. I took the opportunity to not dissect Stuf Said (or recommend its purchase); “Folksy-to-a-fault Funky” is largely relegated to the endnotes; and the evidence and the timeline are examined, to use Stan Taylor’s words, in deadly earnest.

A draft of the book’s introduction is here, and it can be ordered here.

Endnotes

benefit of the doubt: As with certain other people, the correct approach when citing statements of Lee’s, rather than assuming truth until proven otherwise is to fact check everything.

example: According to Evanier (Comics Interview #2, April 1983), one of the things Lee confided to him was that he’d offered plot credit to Kirby at the same time as Ditko but Kirby declined. “Stan said that simultaneously he offered the same thing to Kirby— to give him a co-writing credit—and Jack, instead, asked that the  credits read ‘Produced by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby’ or some variation of  that… Jack asked to keep it ambiguous, and Stan went along with it.” Roz Kirby scoffed at the “Produced by” credit in the TCJ interview.

clarifications: Evanier still waffles on the fraudulent purpose of the company that once employed him, Stan Lee Media. Lee started the company with the help of Arthur Lieberman expressly to secure a new Marvel contract after he was fired, using non-court tested rights to the characters he supposedly co-created. Lee’s “then-friend” and co-founder Peter Paul went to prison for fraud while Lee re-signed with Marvel. Further fraud ensued but never stained Lee’s reputation.

eighth-plus: “the mad right’s all-out war to discredit and demoralize the true enemies of world oligarchy. Those enemies are all fact-using professions.”

KIRBY AT MARVEL

What wonders may be fashioned when mere humans put forth their inner strivings in joint effort. Listen, don’t ask me to dissect the human imagination. All I know is that we’ve all got one, and use it in a variety of ways. So, I write stories, okay?—Jack Kirby

Jack Kirby was one of the greatest writers of the 20th century. Hope of recognition of that achievement in his lifetime was dashed by a fateful encounter in 1958. On the heels of a series of career setbacks, he crossed the threshold of the alcove of a man who was ashamed to be associated with Kirby’s chosen field, comic books.

The man in the alcove was Stan Lee, and he was in charge of assigning work to Kirby and the other freelancers. As with many such assignments in that industry and that era, the privilege of working came at a price: the kickback demanded by Lee and other editors. Concealing the wage theft that fueled Lee’s late-30s career reinvention required the enlistment of Roy Thomas and an army of cult members to conduct a disinformation campaign against Kirby that spanned decades.

Kirby was too literate for comics, but even that was taken away. Lee told the world that he was the one versed in the classic literature that inspired the creations.

To become a wall in this
cheap hovel is an ignoble fate!

Kirby’s ignoble fate was to have his writing ability demeaned by the likes of Lee and Thomas, two men whose added dialogue was called writing under cover of what Lee called the Marvel Method. They knew that their “writing” could only be considered good if they convinced people Kirby’s was bad. (Thomas proudly relates how he warned Lee not to let Kirby write upon his return in 1975. Now in his 80s, he pretends never to have learned the secret that the Marvel Universe was built on the writing of Jack Kirby.)

When Lee hatched the narrative of Marvel’s inception, he used his position at the company to cast himself in Kirby’s role as the creator and primary writer. Today this false narrative is everywhere, and can only be dispelled by spreading the story told by the freelancers.

The Witnesses

The Freelancers

His previous assignment dating to before the 1957 Implosion, Steve Ditko returned to Atlas at the same time as Kirby. He’s considered a reliable witness for a number of reasons. He was one of the few people who had direct contact with Lee during the production of the work, and the approach to history and politics in his writings has been described by Zack Kruse as “ethically consistent.” As a kind of reverse endorsement, none other than Roy Thomas cast aspersions on Ditko’s integrity: Ditko’s first-person historical account conflicted with the official version, and needed to be discredited.

One limit to Ditko’s knowledge is the fact that he only had contact with the other creators through Stan Lee, an unreliable conduit. Ditko was led to believe that Kirby’s working relationship with Lee was the same as his own, with Lee providing a synopsis after a story conference. The reality of the situation was that Kirby supplied Lee with the plot ideas that Lee passed on to Ditko and others.

Wallace Wood was the first Marvel writer/artist to be advertised on a comic’s cover. When he objected to doing Lee’s writing without credit or pay, Lee took away his penciling assignment and reduced him to inking pay. Wood was forced to seek paying work elsewhere.

Other freelancers who, decades after the fact, took issue with Lee taking the writing pay include Stan Goldberg and Dick Ayers. Don Heck gave us a glimpse his part of the elephant.

Roy Thomas

Roy Thomas, a former Marvel staffer in the position of historian as the editor of Alter Ego, is given more credence than the freelancers. Some of them were present when the Marvel Universe came into being; he wasn’t.

From what little I
heard talking to
Stan and Sol Brodsky

Thomas’ history is limited to the company perspective. In 1997, he revealed to Jim Amash precisely how he sourced his knowledge…

Thomas was the target of Kirby’s genius for caricature, and despite his denials he acts as though motivated by a deep resentment. It was Kirby who was primarily responsible for creating the Marvel Universe and keeping open the doors of the outfit that eventually employed Thomas, but in Thomas’ version of history, Kirby was guilty of “delusions of grandeur.”

Larry Lieber

With many hours of interviews with Larry Lieber for his Lee biography True Believer: The Rise and Fall of Stan Lee, Abraham Riesman has shone new light on the relationship between Lee and his younger brother. Estranged at best, Lee assumed little to no responsibility for his brother’s well being, despite the nepotism instrumental in his own career. In his 2011 deposition in the Marvel-Kirby case (the Kirby family applied for copyright reversions on a number of Kirby’s characters and Marvel sued them to prevent it), Lieber disclosed that he was testifying under threat of being stripped of his sole income by his older brother.

To Lee, his brother was a tool in the decades-long campaign he waged to defraud Kirby of credit. Beginning in Origins of Marvel Comics, Lee claimed for over twenty years to be the writer of Kirby’s late ’50s “monster” stories. Kirby refuted the claim in an interview in the The Comics Journal in 1990; his death a few years later provided an opportunity for Larry to do something for his brother. In 1995 Lieber was pressed into service as the stories’ secret writer, no evidence visible or necessary.

The True Believers

Such is the power of a prestigious public spotlight and blind faith.—Steve Ditko

Stan Lee wrote for an audience of children. He didn’t understand the principles of storytelling the way Kirby did, so he dismantled the stories. He adjusted Kirby’s work for that perceived audience, writing down to them in a way that Kirby never did.

Having served in the US Army Signal Corps during WWII, Lee was aware of the power of propaganda. If it could ever be said that he had read a book, it would be Eric Hoffer’s The True Believer: Thoughts on the Nature of Mass Movements (1951). Being strictly a magazine reader though, his exposure to the book likely came by way of a 1956 Look article.

Lee saw no difference between writing comic books and selling them, and he became superhero comics’ most celebrated writer by being their most devoted pitchman… Lee addressed the reader as a smart consumer, generating brand awareness and promoting the idea that one book’s success ought to rub off on another. The reader was told that appreciation of (read: purchase of) this comic placed him/her in the in-group of hip-talking cognoscenti. The direct address of the line implied that the reader was already a member of the group, a “pilgrim,” cool enough to enjoy this comic. Flattery like this got Marvel everywhere.—Darcy Sullivan

Lee created a cult and called them true believers: he played on their self esteem, and they became his army. He convinced them of something he didn’t believe himself, that reading comics was for cool, smart people. It became an enduring myth.

Another myth Lee cultivated was that true believers were older, college-age. He convinced even Will Eisner, who tried to foist it on Phil Seuling in an interview.

EISNER: Well, that was when Stan Lee developed a kind of connection with the “college market.” He produced the…
SEULING: …Pseudo-intellectual market [chuckle]. Grant Stan Lee that he sounded his market and fed it properly. I can’t go along with a lot of the propaganda that it was for adults, the Einsteins, the future Nobel Prize winners of the world. No, no, this just isn’t true. The mass market was still the 10-year-olds that kept plunking down 12 cents for a comic book.

The current generation of true believers sees Lee as the benevolent creator. They side with the company, management, and the characters over the real creators.

Stan Lee

Not all who knew Stan Lee were as enamored of him as the true believers.

Stan Lee has been positioning himself in the public consciousness as the living embodiment of the Marvel spirit for so long now he’s actually managed to make people believe in his megalomaniacal view of history. The fact of the matter is that Lee had a lot less to do with the vaunted “Marvel Philosophy” and the revolutionary Marvel approach to comic books than either Jack Kirby or Steve Ditko. It was Kirby who created unworldly epics in Fantastic Four and it was Kirby who spun morality tales in Captain America. It was Ditko who made Spider-Man the “everyman” comic book and it was Ditko who created the unmatched fantasy in Dr. Strange.—Joe Brancatelli

Well, Stan was tall, skinny. And the shyest person I had ever met up until that time. He would not talk to anyone. He’d hole up in his back office… That shyness. He was very supercilious. He was way above all of us. I think Martin Goodman looked down on him. I intuited that. So I think, in a sense, Stan kicked people below him.—Daniel Keyes

[Lee]’s like a dictator who orders great art to be destroyed because he does not understand it, but vaguely suspects he is being made fun of.—Chris Tolworthy

I was delighted to learn that Lee has attained the status of an authority in the comics field. Twenty years of unrelenting editorial effort to suppress the artistic effort, encourage miserable taste, flood the field with degraded imitations and polluted non-stories, treating artists and writers like cattle, and failure on his part to make an independent success as a cartoonist have certainly qualified him for this respected position.—B. Krigstein

I want the credit (and the money) for everything I do! And I resent guys like Stan Lee more than I can say! He’s my one reason for living… I want to see that no-talent bum get his…
Wallace Wood

Jack Kirby always had the clearest view of his former teenage assistant. In this case he pegged it: Lee was a man without empathy.

…my wife was present when I created these damn characters. The only reason I would have any bad feelings against Stan is because my own wife had to suffer through that with me. It takes a guy like Stan, without feeling, to realize a thing like that. If he hurts a guy, he also hurts his family. His wife is going ask questions. His children are going to ask questions.
Jack Kirby

1961 began badly for Stan Lee, as his newspaper strip, his tether to a career outside of comics, was cancelled. On top of that, his cousin-in-law-publisher yet again threatened to shut down the comics division. Jack Kirby had presented his stack of concepts to Martin Goodman, and they were approved one-by-one for publication. Acting out of desperation, Lee started experimenting with signatures and credits to justify his taking of the writing pay. As Lieber described it, when Lee saw that Kirby’s “strips” had potential (i.e. Goodman approved them), he started “writing” them.

Did Stan Lee do nothing? No. Did he do what he said he did? No. Never an idea man, Lee solicited story ideas from his readers, and used ghostwriters throughout his career. His witness to these events was tainted the moment he decided to take Kirby’s writing pay.

Jack Kirby

Following in the footsteps of the Beats, “serious” artists and writers first vilified and then celebrated the bottom strata of American culture. Comics were certainly near the very bottom, but they got their Charlie Parker, their John Lennon, in Jack Kirby. Were it not for Kirby, there would have been no Marvel Age.—Darcy Sullivan

Jack Kirby was a man compelled to tell stories through his chosen medium of comic books, a field he was too good for. His part in the creation of Marvel is evident in his words, in his interviews and in his margin notes.

As witness to the events, Kirby was there. As an expert on events in which he participated, no one was closer. Kirby’s account is the historical record; with Lee gone, only Thomas, Marvel, and the true believers remain to suppress it.

A Brief History of the Official History

In his “review” of Riesman’s True Believer, Roy Thomas coined a term. The received history is that which shall not be questioned, the version of events that will be defended to the death by the true believers. It was comprised of various propaganda blitzes in which Thomas was instrumental, serving to falsify the events of the ’60s and the late ’50s. Ultimately its goal was to fabricate a sanitized legacy for Stan Lee (and by extension, Thomas) that left his stolen credits intact.

The received history was developed in stages. In 1961, Lee embarked on a scheme for partaking in Kirby’s page rate. Thomas started with the company in 1965, so this is the only stage for which he was not present and has no first-hand knowledge.

The month after the on-sale date of Fantastic Four #1, superfan Thomas had a review of it printed in Jerry Bails’ Comicollector. He wrote that the book stood “somewhere between the Challengers and the new Justice League of America.” The Challengers of the Unknown were Kirby’s ground-breaking and much-imitated team for National which was itself inspiration for, among other things, the JLA revival. The Thomas review is the origin of what would become “the JLA story,” missing (by about six months) the events that the story purports to describe.

In a 1963 letter, Lee told Jerry Bails that Steve Ditko had created Dr Strange on spec. Lee didn’t have much faith in the character’s sales prospects.

In January 1966, Lee and Kirby were interviewed by Nat Freedland for an article in the New York Herald Tribune. Lee put on a show, jumping around and physically acting out an upcoming Fantastic Four story, ostensibly “writing” it on the fly for Kirby to “draw” later. The readership had taken notice of Kirby’s choreographed fight scenes, and Lee wanted credit for their conception. Freedland’s published article exaggerated Lee’s contributions to the work and made Kirby look like an oaf. In an interview for True Believer, Freedland admitted to Riesman that he’d been angling for Lee to give him a job.

In 1968, Perfect Film & Chemical purchased Marvel. Having padded his résumé with Kirby’s accomplishments, Lee was perfectly positioned to assume the mantle of creator of everything. This suited the new owners because Lee had been on staff when the creating was done, mitigating any intellectual property concerns.

By the same year, Lee worship was already recognized as a problem in one of the Marvel-specific fanzines. Between 1968 and 1974, a narrative was established to cover Lee’s fabricated credits, culminating in Origins of Marvel Comics under his byline.

Origins gave us the JLA story, in which Martin Goodman allegedly saw competitor National’s sales figures for The Justice League of America and told Lee to come up with a superhero team. Roy Thomas could have ghostwritten this bit, simply recycling his 13-year-old review of FF #1. The Origins version strategically omitted Thomas’ earlier mention of the Challengers, which tied the FF to Kirby’s earlier work.

Kirby’s published interviews date back to the late 1960s. The one conducted in 1989 by Gary Groth, published in The Comics Journal in 1990, struck a nerve. Lee intimated in Origins that he’d had a hand in producing the monster stories, a claim Kirby refuted in the interview. This prompted Lee to begin formulating a propaganda counterattack that would take years to coalesce. For starters he lashed out, telling an interviewer that Kirby was either evil or crazy. He then reasserted his false claim to having written the stories in a “Soap Box” and a reprint introduction.

In 1994, Kirby died; the following year, Lee redirected his attack. Larry Lieber was introduced as the (uncredited) provider of full scripts to Kirby for the monster stories, based on Lee’s plots. Upon examination, it becomes obvious that the plots were Kirby’s from his (already written) finished pages; Lee was simply passing the plots along to Lieber. In his 2011 deposition, Lieber admitted he would turn in the scripts to Lee, and had no contact with a prospective “artist.” Kirby had no need of a Lieber or Lee script for a story he’d already written and dialogued himself.

There were no credits on those stories, although many were signed on Kirby’s behalf by Dick Ayers. Kirby was assigned his first in the spring of 1958, and the first credit boxes appeared in in December 1962. As an indication of when it first became important to Lee, 1973 monster reprints were retrofitted with credits for the first time. Lee was added as writer; Lieber didn’t rate a mention. Lieber failed to include “writing full scripts for Jack Kirby” in his 1975 Atlas/Seaboard CV, something that would have been a highlight of his career at that time.

You know something, Roy? Now that you say it, that’s probably true.
Lee, signaling that Thomas is making it up

In 1998, Lee was fired through Marvel’s bankruptcy proceedings, and Arthur Lieberman became a visible presence at his side. In Comic Book Artist #2 and the Alter Ego on its flip side, Roy Thomas swung into action providing much of what we know today as the early history of Marvel. Lee was quoted as saying “That’s absolutely true” about a story that was absolutely false.

In 1999, Michael Vassallo proved that Lee originally had no intention of being involved in Kirby’s monster stories other than through his staff position as editor. Lee’s signature was his mark for staking his claim to credit for “writing” something, whether that claim was valid or not, and he hadn’t signed a single one. Instead of science fiction or suspense, he stuck with his strengths: the teen humour titles and westerns.

When Thomas interviewed Lieber for Alter Ego the same year, Lieber maintained the full-scripts-for-Kirby charade, but an incredulous Thomas interpreted it as adding dialogue.

Finally, in a 2010 deposition in the Marvel-Kirby case, Lee, with Lieberman again at his side, laid claim to sole creatorship of every property for which the estate had applied for reversion of copyright. After the Kirbys commanded a steps-of-the-Supreme-Court settlement from Marvel, Lee and Thomas doubled down on their false history.

The Marvel Method

The Marvel Method was a kickback scheme. Stan Lee spun it as giving his “artists” freedom, keeping them busy while he wrote stories for more than one at a time. The reality is he was taking the pay for writing that was already done when he received the pages, and in exchange he would deign to give his writer/artists further assignments. Lee didn’t plot and he didn’t write scripts, but he frequently mandated changes to stories after the penciled pages were turned in.

Lee never wrote a full script for any work I did at Marvel.—Steve Ditko

I had no script. [At Marvel] I was never given a script.
Jack Kirby

Daniel Keyes:

WM[Will Murray]: Stan Lee is today considered one of the great comic book writers. Was he writing many comics in those days?
KEYES: Not to my knowledge. He edited, I guess. He was a businessman, as far as I was concerned. And a shy businessman is almost an oxymoron. I’ve never thought of Stan as a writer at all. So that surprises me. Of course, he might have been turning in comics for a few extra bucks, doing it under pen names so that Martin Goodman wouldn’t know about it. I never thought of Stan as a writer. He says that he created Spider-Man. I never thought of him as a creative person. It could be that one of the writers created it and sent in a synopsis. And it got picked up. But of course he’s become a multi-millionaire for that stuff.

Stan Goldberg:

One time I was in Stan’s office and told him, “I haven’t got another plot [for Millie the Model].” Stan got out of his chair, walked over to me, looked me in the face, and said very seriously, “I don’t ever want to hear you say you can’t think of another plot.” Then he walked back and sat in his chair. He didn’t think he needed to tell me anything more. After that, I could think of a plot in two seconds.
JA[Jim Amash]: Sounds like you were doing the bulk of the writing then.
GOLDBERG: Well, I was.

Dick Ayers (as reported by Barry Pearl):

Dick told us how Stan called him one day and said, “I can’t think of a story for Sgt. Fury #23. We won’t have an issue unless you think of something!” A worried Dick could not sleep that night and kept Lindy awake too. They talked about story after story until, in the middle of the night, Lindy came up with the idea of the Howlers saving a nun and her young charges. Dick said, “Stan will never go for that, he wants nothing about religion… But I’ll ask him.” When Dick did, Stan said, “What a great idea, I’ll use it.” So they put together a terrific story. When Dick’s finished pages were shown to him, he saw the credits where he was only listed as artist. He went to Stan’s office and asked if he could also be listed as co-plotter. Stan yelled, “Since when did you developed an ego? Get out of here!”

Wallace Wood:

I enjoyed working with Stan on DAREDEVIL but for one thing. I had to make up the whole story. He was being paid for writing and I was being paid for drawing but he didn’t have any ideas. I’d go in for a plotting session and we’d just stare at each other until I came up with a storyline. I felt that I was writing the book but not being paid for writing.

Conventional wisdom, disseminated by popular scholarship and the leading Kirby fanzine, says Lee did more plotting and writing in Marvel’s early days, until his “artists” developed their own plotting abilities. If he was leaning on Goldberg for Millie plots and Ayers for Sgt Fury, it is simply not believable that he ever supplied Kirby and Ditko with plots. A cursory glance at the early issues of Amazing Spider-Man shows us that the title subsisted on Kirby plots until Ditko took over with ASM #3. The physical evidence shows that Lee didn’t plot, but solicited or appropriated ideas throughout his career.

The disinformation campaign

And if all others accepted the lie which the Party imposed—if all records told the same tale—then the lie passed into history and became truth.

Early in the FF letters pages, for his audience of children, Lee jokingly accused Kirby of greed. Projection became one of his tools for dealing with the degree of insubordination that might be expected from victims of wage theft.

Considering that our artist signs the name JACK KIRBY on everything he can get his greedy little fingers on, I think we can safely claim that that’s his name!

Lee was the one who signed everything he “wrote,” including the paper doll pages in the teen humour mags. His titles were being squeezed out by the sf books, and when Martin Goodman gave the green light to Kirby’s team concept, Lee signed on to the project: on the splash pages.

Kirby didn’t sign his own name to his work, but when Dick Ayers inked, he signed “Kirby+Ayers.” Lee, in addition to putting his name on work to which he hadn’t contributed, began painting out the Kirby+Ayers signatures. He perceived that they gave the (correct) idea that he wasn’t involved, or that Kirby might have been the writer (also correct).

By the ninth issue of Fantastic Four Lee was taking the “script” credit and giving Kirby an “art” credit. In the eleventh issue, he wrote on the letters page, “Stan Lee writes the stories and Jack Kirby draws them.” Credit boxes replaced signatures as the outward reflection of Lee claiming the writing page rate for the work of Kirby and his other collaborators; they were bound to accept the situation or lose future assignments.

A few years later, Lee repeated his letters page shenanigans with Wood. In a display of petulance that gives perspective to the company view that Kirby’s Funky Flashman was “unprofessional,” Lee tore Wood apart in the editorial pages in front of the same audience of children.

Not Stan’s fault

Abraham Riesman, True Believer: The general public is typically aware of only one narrative of the Marvel revolution, and that is Stan’s. His can be summarized pretty simply: “Stan came up with all the characters, plots, and dialogue; Jack just came up with the visuals.”
Roy Thomas, Alter Ego: Actually, if the “general public” knows only the version of events that Riesman paraphrases above, that’s hardly Stan’s fault. First, it’s because the “general public” never read the many, many places in the pages of Marvel’s 1960s comics wherein Stan praised Jack Kirby’s contributions to the skies, often giving him credit for what amounts to co-plotting stories, and on occasion even saying that Jack was likely to come up with a particular story all on his own.

“Not Stan’s fault” is a common theme in Thomas’ retelling. It’s “not Stan’s fault” that everyone believes he’s the creator, plotter, and writer; if only he hadn’t constantly portrayed himself that way, and had corrected interviewers whenever they got it wrong. At odds with “not Stan’s fault” are his 1987 interview comment, “the characters’ concepts were mine,” and his 2010 deposition wherein he claimed credit for every creation. It is entirely “Stan’s fault” that Kirby, Ditko, Wood and others didn’t get paid for their work.

The “artists”

Lee is praised for giving abundant credit to his “artists,” but that was part of the strategy. His collaborators were also creators and writers, so telling the world they were his artists was a calculated move.

Lee is said to have made his supporting cast famous. That might have been the case for some of them, but it was Kirby who’d made Lee famous. Kirby should have come out of the decade recognized as the industry’s top creator/writer/artist, yet his 1970 page rate was no different than Marvel’s or DC’s top non-writing artists.

Lee often said Kirby was very creative, but never credited him with creating a copyrightable property. Kirby was called a great plotter, but he never received a plot credit; Lee generously bestowed plot credits on many (particularly himself), but never the actual plotter. Lee gave himself a plot credit in places where it’s obvious his only involvement with a story was adding the credits.

Kirby was content to call himself the artist. Each time Lee (and later Thomas) used the word, however, it was designed to diminish a writer/artist’s contribution and plant the idea that Lee was doing the writing.

Evil

When Kirby’s interview for The Comics Journal was published in 1990, it exposed Lee’s happy bullpen as a façade. Lee had always made tactical use of spreading rumours about collaborators who had rejected his working conditions, and this time he didn’t disappoint.

“Some of the things [Jack] said, there is no way he could ever explain that to me. I would have to think he’s either lost his mind or he’s a very evil person.”

As with his greed comment, the worst accusation Lee could imagine was dictated by self-knowledge.

Kirby couldn’t write/Kirby needed a collaborator

The contrived narrative that Kirby could not succeed on his own was best served by redirecting credit for the stories he wrote. Kirby’s “monster” stories that kept the comics division from closing in the late ’50s were thus retroactively credited as a collaborative effort.

Since Lee’s death, Thomas is in charge of the false historical record. He simply ignores the physical evidence and repeats the talking points of the “received history.” The greatest insult he can imagine about Kirby’s writing is to say he didn’t understand it.

The true believers continue to echo the mantra that Kirby couldn’t write, but for those weened on Lee’s kiddie fare, Kirby’s writing is simply over their heads.

Jack Kirby’s writing was “Opera” at DC and if you don’t understand what I mean, no amount of explaining will change your mind. Every Saturday morning in my early years assisting Russ Manning at his Mojeska Canyon studio we would listen to the Met Opera broadcasts on Radio. Russ told me to understand that opera was very similar to comic books: Larger than life happenings, plots, character reactions…on stage in song like the pen and ink going-on of comic books. Okay… I’ve oversimplified…but it made sense to me! Jack’s 4th world writing was operatic. If there are a lot of you who don’t “get” what Jack was doing I am sad for you.—Michael Royer

What a lot of people don’t get is Kirby’s level of SOPHISTICATION–his work is full of allusions to other literary works. Your reading is enriched if you already know who Isaiah or Daniel or Caliban were. If someone doesn’t get it, it’s a knock against them, not Kirby.—Darrell Epp

Kirby’s writing is rife with bizarre word play, clichéd and surreal dialogue, awkward appropriations of youth-culture lingo, and entirely invented slang and technological argot. While charged with giddy momentum, it is not humorous in the knowing “camp” way that typified so much of comic writing in the wake of his early sixties work (and its translation into TV dialogue on Batman ). Instead, Kirby’s writing is riddled with the kind of rollicking unconditional humor that animates the work of Charlie Chaplin or Ornette Coleman: lyrical, sentimental, and revolutionary… It was in his collaborative books with Lee, however, that Kirby’s dominance becomes clear, as Lee’s trademark coldwar huckster bombast falls increasingly short of the expansively democratic and accelerating mystic vision that possessed Kirby.—Doug Harvey

Kirby also gave exquisite voice to ordinary people, hitting his stride in his ’40s and ’50s romance stories and unpublished teleplays. In 1970, after shaking the restrictions of Lee’s limited imagination, he picked up where he left off. Spectacular but unrecorded sales of Kirby’s DC work resulted in its demise, but again, misinformation, this time about the beginnings of the direct market, plays into the anti-Kirby narrative.

For many years, Stan Lee has taken sole credit for the creation of Marvel’s best-known characters. Lee underscored his claims in his book, Origins of Marvel Comics.

“That’s his version of it,” Kirby observes. “If he wants to say that, it’s his book. If I write my book, you’ll get my side of it. But I can tell you that my side of it is the real side—Stan Lee never created a character. In fact, if you look it up in Maurice Horn’s book, he was amazed, too. He was amazed at the kind of things that came out of Marvel after I got there and the fact that Stan Lee had never created a character before that. What has he created since? Nothing. I don’t think that Stan Lee cares about creating characters. That’s my professional opinion. But as far as writing the stories is concerned, he never wrote the stories—not mine anyway.

“I was a penciller and a storyteller and I insisted on doing my own writing. I always wrote my own story, no matter what it was. Nobody ever wrote a story for me. I created my own characters. I always did that. That was the whole point of comics for me. I created my own concepts and I enjoyed doing that.”

Lee rewrote Jack’s captions and word balloons when he brought the artwork into the office.

“Lee wouldn’t let me put the dialogue in. I wrote the story and made up the characters. I had to tell Stan Lee what the story was going to be. He didn’t know. Nobody’s ever seen Stan Lee write a story. I’ve never seen him write a story–not in front of me. Stan was an editor. I argued all the time about doing the word balloons, but I wasn’t allowed to do them. Stan Lee was editor, and his cousin was the publisher and I wasn’t going to argue with that…”

James Van Hise, “A Talk with the King”

For three years, Lee stayed out of Kirby’s way and let him save the company. When it became evident that Kirby had the writing pay to show for it, Lee took measures to appropriate the pay and credit. The ensuing nine years were the low point of Kirby’s career.

The first step in getting to the truth is to disregard the constantly-changing Lee narrative as well as the received history. Jack Kirby is still the most reliable witness to the creation of Marvel: with his interviews and margin notes, he provided us with an outline for his book. With the help of his words, the view of the freelancers, and the physical evidence, the true story behind Marvel’s origin will continue to emerge.

Next: 1958-1960

Endnotes

“What wonders may be fashioned…” Jack Kirby, introduction, The Kid Cowboys of Boys’ Ranch, Marvel Comics, 1991.

ashamed to be associated: As soon as Stan had the opportunity to go back to his full-time job in comic books [after the war], he started trying to get out of it… It seems Stan was utterly humiliated by his profession. He and Joan would throw and attend lavish soirees, and Stan later told of doing everything he could to avoid discussing work when he was out partying.
—Abraham Riesman, True Believer: The Rise and Fall of Stan Lee, Crown, 2021.

alcove: Back then Marvel was Timely Comics. At the time I worked there, Magazine Management was big when the comics were big… it was small when the comics were small. At one time in the late ’50s it was just an alcove, with one window, and Stan was doing all the corrections himself; he had no assistants.
—“A Conversation with Artist-Writer Larry Lieber,” interviewed by Roy Thomas, Alter Ego V3No2, Fall 1999.

too literate for comics: From a discussion at the Jack Kirby Dialogue group, 27 February 2022: That’s something that I am struggling with in my book about Kirby. I point out serious implications in Kirby’s work, but the fact is, he was having fun, writing fiction, and usually has a very light touch. This is very common with great writers, e.g. Mark Twain, or the bawdy jokes in Shakespeare, or ancient fables using animals. But readers seem to want EITHER silly fiction OR serious messages, and can’t get their head round how good writers frequently combine both.
—Chris Tolworthy
In this way Kirby is like Philip K. Dick, Cervantes, Melville, and other visionary writers–his tone seems to charge everything (plot, story, characters, dialogue) with some kind of light and energy that borders on farce, skimming the top of sentimentality, but going deep in topics that are serious and tragic. It strikes me that there’s no easy way to say how he or other writers “achieve” this, but it goes back to (in my opinion) a love of the world and all it contains, mixed with deep moral concern.
—Chris Duffy

“To become a wall…”: “Himon,” Mister Miracle #9, August 1972.

Thomas proudly relates: And Stan calls me into his office and says, “Listen, I’ve got news! Jack’s coming back!” Of course, he knew I had talked to him, so it wasn’t a surprise for him to tell me that. “Well, that’s great,” I said. He said, “I think we can get him to come back. He’s interested in coming back.” So he says, “What do you think about it? I said, “Well, have him come back. Don’t let him write.” I didn’t mean plot; I meant write the dialogue, because he just really didn’t have it for our audience.
—Roy Thomas interviewed by Matt Herring, conducted in August 2017, published in The Jack Kirby Collector #74, Spring 2018.

false narrative: We dedicate Avengers Campus to the incomparable Stan Lee. That person who helps others simply because it should or must be done, and because it is the right thing to do, is indeed without a doubt a real superhero. Thank you, Stan, for inspiring the hero within each of us. You have made us all True Believers.—”Stan Lee Honored with New Plaque at Avengers Campus in Disney California Adventure Park,” marvel.com, 27 February 2022.

returned to Atlas: Additionally, how did Jack get to Stan’s office, out of the blue, the Monday (or Tuesday) after Joe [Maneely]’s death over the weekend? The only way is that Stan called him. Don Heck, in an interview with Will Murray, stated that Stan called him up immediately after Joe died, telling him that there was work open. Heck had not worked for Stan since the implosion in the Spring of 1957. Heck was also in that first issue of Strange Worlds, on a story with a job #T-77, the number immediately after Jack’s story. The other artists that issue were Steve Ditko, T-81 and an unknown artist, T-80.—Michael J Vassallo, “Stan Lee (1922-2018) – The Timely Years,” Timely-Atlas-Comics blog post.

“ethically consistent”: Ditko’s convoluted—but intellectually and ethically consistent—approach gives us insight into a strand of American political and religious thought
—Zack Kruse, Mysterious Travelers: Steve Ditko and the Search for a New Liberal Identity, University Press of Mississippi, March 2021.

called into question: Steve Ditko ended his Spider-man series on a low note, as far as this quarter is concerned. It’s ludicrous that he thinks he’s the only person with any integrity… and that every time fans don’t leap to his defense it means something other than that they’ve stopped caring about what percentage of credit for Spidey goes to him, to Stan, or to Kirby. His binary approach to right and wrong, alas, simply makes him liable to be written off. Still, I’m glad he wrote the articles he did, even if they must be taken skeptically just like any other recollections forty years after the fact. I suspect that much of what he says is true… and that all of it is sincerely stated… but he’s not the possessor of the final word on the subject. Even so, he’s a helluvan artist, and was important to the field.
—Roy Thomas, letter, The Comics, Vol. 15, No. 4, April 2004.
“Was”?—Robin Snyder’s response

an unreliable conduit: The accounts of Ditko and Lieber indicate that they were kept in the dark regarding Lee’s interactions with his other collaborators.

Kirby supplied Lee: Steve Ditko provided an example in his essay about Kirby’s Spider-Man. He would be called Spider-Man. Jack would do the pencilling and I was to ink the character… Who first came up with the specific name, Spider-Man, us for Stan and Jack to resolve… I said it sounded like The Fly, which Joe Simon had done for Archie Publications… Later, at some point, I was given the job of drawing Spider-Man.—”An Insider’s Part of Comics History: Jack Kirby’s Spider-Man,” © 2002 Steve Ditko
Stan Taylor attributes plots for the first three books to Kirby, the kind of plots that were typically presented in Kirby’s concept pages.—“Spider-Man: The Case for Kirby,” 2003. Posted
on The Kirby Effect: The Journal of the Jack Kirby Museum & Research Center.
Larry Lieber could doubtless name anything on his list, since he believed Lee was plotting Kirby’s already-plotted monster stories.

others: Don Heck provided another when he described how he received the plot for Iron Man. According to Mark Evanier (friend and early-1970s assistant to Jack Kirby), who got the story from the artist himself, Kirby created the character design for Iron Man and brought it to Stan Lee sometime prior to the creation of Thor, Spider-Man, and Ant-Man. If verified, this may date from the period during which he brought in the original version of Spider-Man. Little if any thought was given to who the man inside Iron Man’s bulky armor would be. Kirby’s concept sketch ultimately became the cover to Tales of Suspense #39 (March 1963)… Heck had received a Photostat of the already-designed Tales of Suspense cover… “Stan called me up and told me that we were going to have this character, and the character’s name was Iron Man. That his name was Tony Stark and the way he was wounded in Vietnam. It was just a synopsis over the phone. We didn’t actually sit down and work out the character and the rest. I knew what the costume looked like because I got the [Kirby] cover in the mail.”
—Don Heck to Will Murray, “The Secret Kirby Origin of Iron Man: Jack Kirby, Don Heck, Ol’ Shellhead, & Marvel Comics,” Alter Ego #170, July 2021.
What Don said was that any time you saw a Kirby cover with a nice clear shot of a new villain or costume design on it, it meant Jack had designed and more than likely created that character, and the cover was a way of getting him paid for the design job… When [Kirby] was doing interior layouts, he was surely plotting, and would include character sketches to show his intent.
—Kurt Busiek, “Don Heck interview,” kirbyville (Internet mailing list), 28 November 2010. Don Heck interview conducted by Richard Howell and Carol Kalish, originally for ARTFORM magazine (it was ultimately published in Comics Feature #21). Adding to the Iron Man mystery is why Kirby’s obvious origin story for the character appeared second.

advertised on a comic’s cover: On the cover of Wood’s premiere issue, Daredevil #5, Lee blurbed “Under the brilliant artistic craftsmanship of famous illustrator Wally Wood, Daredevil reaches new heights of glory!”

“From what little I heard”: Roy Thomas interviewed by Jim Amash, conducted by phone in September 1997, published in The Jack Kirby Collector #18, January 1998.
AMASH: In that period when Marvel introduced The Inhumans, Galactus, and the Black Panther, would you say those were all co-creations, or did Jack come in like he did with the Silver Surfer and say, “Stan, I have these characters”?
THOMAS: From what little I heard from talking to Stan and Sol Brodsky, the Silver Surfer was kind of an exception, although there may have been a few villains that were created by Jack.

“delusions of grandeur”: What’s done on pp. 48-49 of CBC #1 is not far from the kind of statement Jack himself made, during the years when he had first left Marvel, when an interviewer tried to pin him down and ask him what Stan Lee did in those stories. “Stan Lee was my editor,” was all Jack would say. Jack, who of course was and remains even years after his demise one of the greatest artists in the history of the comic book medium, was given at that stage to delusions of grandeur that went far beyond even his massive talents and contributions
—Roy Thomas, Letter to the editor, Comic Book Creator #3, Fall 2013.

True Believer: Abraham Riesman, True Believer: The Rise and Fall of Stan Lee, Crown, 2021.

his 2011 deposition: Larry Lieber’s deposition, 7 January 2011, Justia, Dockets & Filings, Second Circuit, New York, New York Southern District Court, Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Filing 65, Exhibit 4. Portions available at the Justia website.

coerced into testifying: Lee’s attempt to get his brother Larry Lieber to testify in Marvel’s favor is also revealing. Lieber’s sole livelihood has been drawing Lee’s Spider-Man strip for 23 years. Document 102-5 at 7:18-23, 59:2-19. Marvel sought to recruit Lieber and others, but Lieber declined. Id. at 51:20-52:23. Lee then leaned on his own brother. Id. at 58:19-59:19 (Lieber: “[Lee] said, ‘Well I hope you don’t lose the [Spider-Man] strip because of it or something.’”).—Appellants’ Opening Brief, Case No. 11-3333: Marvel Characters, Incorporated, Marvel Worldwide, Incorporated, MVL Rights, LLC, v Lisa R. Kirby, Neal L. Kirby, Susan N. Kirby, Barbara J. Kirby; United States Court of Appeals for the Second Circuit, signed by Marc Toberoff, 25 January 2012.

Origins: Stan Lee, Origins of Marvel Comics, Simon and Schuster, 1974.

The Comics Journal interview: Jack and Roz Kirby interviewed by Gary Groth, conducted in summer of 1989, The Comics Journal #134, February 1990.

“Such is the power…”: Steve Ditko, “A Mini-History 13: Speculation,” The Comics, v14n8, August 2003.

“Lee saw no difference…”: Darcy Sullivan, “Marvel Comics and the Kiddie Hustle,” The Comics Journal #152, August 1992.

Phil Seuling in an interview: Shop Talk: Phil Seuling, Will Eisner’s Quarterly #3, September 1984.

The True Believer: Eric Hoffer, The True Believer: Thoughts on the Nature of Mass Movements, Harper & Brothers, 1951. Mark Seifert ties Lee and Jean Shepherd’s trademark use of the word “Excelsior” to Hoffer’s book, and speculates on the inspiration for the Merry Marvel Marching Society (a badge that some true believers still wear with pride). Lee, Hoffer, and Shepherd all served in the Signal Corps, and the Chowder and Marching Society was a post-war club for Republican power brokers (two of whom went on to the presidency from 1968 to 1976). The comic strip Barnaby provided the name. Some excerpts:
p 155 …the true believer who is wholly assimilated into a compact collective body has found a new identity and a new life. He is one of the chosen, bolstered and protected by invincible powers, and destined to inherit the earth… The true believer is eternally incomplete, eternally insecure.
p 173 The genuine man of words himself can get along without faith in absolutes. He values the search for truth as much as truth itself. He delights in the clash of thought and in the give-and-take of controversy. If he formulates a philosophy and a doctrine, they are more an exhibition of brilliance and an exercise in dialectics than a program of action and the tenets of a faith. His vanity, it is true, often prompts him to defend his speculations with savagery and even venom; but his appeal is usually to reason and not to faith. The fanatics and the faith-hungry masses, however, are likely to invest such speculations with the certitude of holy writ, and make them the fountainhead of a new faith.
p 175 However, the freedom the masses crave is not freedom of self-expression and self-realization, but freedom from the intolerable burden of an autonomous existence. They want freedom from “the fearful burden of free choice,” freedom from the arduous responsibility of realizing their ineffectual selves and shouldering the blame for the blemished product. They do not want freedom of conscience, but faith–blind, authoritarian faith.

Look article: 12 June 1956.

“Stan Lee has been…”: Joe Brancatelli, “The Comic Books: Some thoughts on what has gone before,” Creepy #115, February 1980.

“Well, Stan was tall…”: Daniel Keyes interviewed by Will Murray, Alter Ego #13, March 2002.

“[Lee]’s like a dictator…”: Chris Tolworthy, Marvel Method group, 26 September 2016.

“I was delighted to learn…”: B. Krigstein, in 1965, when told by [John] Benson that Stan Lee was spearheading comics’ revitalization. Messages in a Bottle: Comic Book Stories by B. Krigstein, Fantagraphics Books, 2013. This was a variation on a quote from Squa Tront #6 in 1975. Greg Sadowski, editor of the Fantagraphics book, said the full quote was taken from a letter from Krigstein to Benson in the 1970s.

“I want the credit…”: Wallace Wood, letter to John Hitchcock, 5 September 1978. Wood had more to say.
WHAT MAKES STANLEY RUN?
Once upon a time, many years ago a young man, born the son of a famous comic book publisher, decided to become rich and famous. He had no idea how to go about this at first, lacking both the brains and talent to achieve this goal. But he was driven by one emotion, rather TWO .. ENVY and HATE. Envy for the people who were responsible for his enviable state, and hatred for the people who could DRAW. Comics are, after all, an artist’s medium. I’ve never read a story in comics that I’d bother with if it were written in novel form.
Did I say Stanley had no smarts? Well, He DID come up with two sure fire ideas… the first one was “Why not let the artists WRITE the stories as well as draw them?”…. And the second was …. ALWAYS SIGN YOUR NAME ON TOP … BIG”. And the rest is history … Stanley, of course became rich and famous … over the bodies of people like Bill and Jack. Bill, who had created the character that had made his father rich wound up COLORING and doing odd jobs.
And Jack? Well, a friend of mine summed it up like this .. “Stanley and Jack have a conference, then Jack goes home, and after a couple of month’s gestation, a new book is born. Stanley gets all the money and all the credit… And all poor old Jack gets is a sore ass hole.”
—Wallace Wood, “What makes Stanley run?” Woodwork Gazette, v1n5, 1980.

“my wife was present…”: Jack Kirby, interviewed by Gary Groth, conducted in summer of 1989, The Comics Journal #134, February 1990.

1961 began badly: It’s important to remember how long Lee was a failure. While he worked for a relative, Lee could never even get promoted beyond Martin Goodman’s comic books. While he had the examples of Mickey Spillane graduating to paperbacks and other Goodman writers like Bruce Jay Friedman and Mario Puzo graduating from Goodman’s magazines into novels, plays and screenplays, Lee couldn’t even get promoted to the ‘men’s sweat’ magazines that Goodman published. During the 1950s when comics were being vilified, that must have been particularly painful.
When Marvel finally took off in the ’60s, Lee had 20 years of pent-up hunger for success driving him. He wasn’t about to share credit with anyone. Admitting that Kirby and Ditko were the cause of his success, even partially, would only confirm Martin Goodman’s low opinion of him. And Goodman was right. There are dozens of examples of comics writers and artists who became prose authors, illustrators and fine artists. Lee is still milking the superhero genre even though he hasn’t created any successes in the last 40 years and never did without Kirby and Ditko.
Mark Mayerson, comment 7853, “Digging Ditko, Part 4: Expressions, Ideas, & Stan Lee,” SRBissette.com, 23 September 2012.

As Lieber described it: When Stan saw that the strips had potential, he started writing them
—“A Conversation with Artist-Writer Larry Lieber,” Lieber interviewed by Roy Thomas, Alter Ego V3No2, Fall 1999. Lee noticed the “strips” had potential as soon as Goodman approved one of Kirby’s concepts for publication.

“Following in the footsteps…”: Darcy Sullivan, “Marvel Comics and the Kiddie Hustle,” The Comics Journal #152, August 1992.

In his “review”: Roy Thomas, ‘”There Are Lies… And Damn Lies…” And Then, Apparently, There’s STAN LEE! A “Book Report” On The Controversial Biography By ABRAHAM RIESMAN,’ Alter Ego #171, September 2021.

had a review of it: Yes, these are THE FANTASTIC FOUR, heroes of a new comic put out bi-monthly by Canam Publishers Sales Corporation. Produced by Stan Lee, and Jack Kirby (of the old-time Simon and Kirby team, which originated Captain America, the Guardian, Stuntman, Challengers of the Unknown [sic], and many others) this comic stands between the CHALLENGERS and the new JUSTICE LEAGUE OF AMERICA.
—Roy Thomas, The Comicollector #1, September 1961. Thomas mistakenly identified Challengers as originating with Simon and Kirby when it was a Kirby solo creation. Simon laid claim only after his biography was published without mention of it, although he had successfully tested the waters by detailing his part in Spider-Man’s creation.

Lee told Jerry Bails: Well, we have a new character in the works for STRANGE TALES (just a 5-page filler named DR. STRANGE–) Steve Ditko is gonna draw him. Sort of a black magic theme. The first story is nothing great, but perhaps we can make something of him– ’twas Steve’s idea, and I figgered we’d give it a chance, although again, we had to rush the first one too much. Little sidelight: Originally decided to call him MR. STRANGE, but thought the MR. bit too similar to MR. FANTASTIC– now however, I just remember we had a villain called DR. STRANGE just xxxxxx recently in one of our mags– hope it won’t be too confusing! Oh well…
—Stan Lee, letter to Jerry Bails, 1/9/63, Justia, Dockets & Filings, Second Circuit, New York, New York Southern District Court, Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Filing 65, Exhibit 27.

Lee and Kirby were interviewed: Nat Freedland, “Super Heroes With Super Problems,” New York Herald Tribune, 9 January 1966.

Freedland admitted: “I called Marvel and talked to Stan Lee and said, ‘How come you didn’t put me in your column, now that the thing is out?'” Freedland recalls. “And he told me about Kirby being upset—I think he put it as, ‘upset about having his feelings hurt’—and I thought, Gee, I can see why he would.”
Nevertheless, Freedland remained enchanted and landed on a new idea: “I wanted to be a Marvel writer,” he says. “There was a writing test, and I took it and turned it in, and I got the word back from someone, saying I didn’t have the style or quality—by which I mean characteristics—or writing stuff that would work with Marvel Comics.”
—Abraham Riesman, True Believer: The Rise and Fall of Stan Lee.

Lee worship: Thus, MM will serve as a vehicle of constructive criticism in an attempt to abolish both Lee-worshipping and anti-Marvelism, and in an attempt to establish a non-biased, broad-minded comics viewpoint in out readers.
—editor Greg Kishel, Marvel Mirror Vol 1 #5, April-May 1968.

struck a nerve: During and just after Kirby’s original art dispute with Marvel, Lee appeared conciliatory toward Kirby. In the late 1980s, Kirby was commissioned to write new introductions for various reprint volumes. Mere months before he died, in Monster Menace #2 (January 1994, on sale the previous November), Kirby wrote, “I had great enjoyment creating monster books back in the late 50s and early 60s.” This was drowned out by Lee’s own introduction and Mort Todd’s editorials (see below). As a result of the TCJ interview, it became quite important to Lee to reassert a claim he first made in 1973.

participated: Let me take you back to 1961… Jack and I were having a ball turning out monster stories with such imperishable titles as “Xom, the Creature Who Swallowed the Earth,” “Grottu, the Giant Ant-Eater,” “Thomgorr, the Anti-Social Alien,” “Fin Fang Foom” (I never could remember what his shtick was–if he was a he), and others of equally redeeming artistic and literary value.
—Stan Lee, “If One is Good, Four Will Be Better,” introduction to the origin of the Fantastic Four, Origins of Marvel Comics, 1974.

refuted: Jack Kirby, interviewed by Gary Groth, conducted in summer of 1989, The Comics Journal #134, February 1990.
GROTH: When you went to Marvel in ’58 and ’59, Stan was obviously there.
KIRBY: Yes, and he was the same way.
GROTH: And you two collaborated on all the monster stories?
KIRBY: Stan Lee and I never collaborated on anything! I’ve never seen Stan Lee write anything. I used to write the stories just like I always did.

Soap Box and a reprint: If the monster strips were popular enough to scatter around in our other titles, why not devote entire magazines to them? That was fine with me. I loved writing them and dreaming up the goofy names. As a matter of fact, I’d first invent a name and then try to find a monster and a plot that would justify it… Actually, it was tougher writing the monster scripts than the super hero tales.
—from “STAN’S SOAP BOX” in Marvel Age #115, August 1992. In reality there were no monster scripts.
Stan Lee wrote all of the enclosed tales, as he did most of the stories published in the late 1950s from Marvel (then known as Atlas Comics).
—Mort Todd, Monster Menace #1, December 1993. Todd’s editorial message appeared below the yellow box that contained “MONSTER MENACE: Some Titanic Thoughts… by STAN LEE,” that said absolutely nothing in five paragraphs, although by that point Stan Lee was just a pseudonym for some Marvel editor. Note that neither of the Lee “essays” mentioned Larry Lieber.

Larry Lieber was introduced: Lieber’s big reveal happened in the article “Monster Master,” in Comics Scene #52, September 1995. Writer Will Murray took everything at face value, dismissing his own journalism from an article he wrote eleven years earlier calling the stories a collaboration between Lee and Kirby but giving Kirby the credit for their inspiration.

Upon examination: Kirby’s pencilled lettering in balloons and captions on the original art is the rule, not the exception, in the late ’50s and early ’60s. The Heritage Auctions website and IDW’s Jack Kirby Heroes and Monsters Artist’s Edition are good sources of scans showing Kirby’s lettering. Two pages of Thomas’ favourite example, “Fin Fang Foom,” appear in the IDW book: clearly visible is Kirby’s pencilled lettering inside the balloons, with Lee’s editorial corrections outside.

December 1962: Stan Lee created his first two credit boxes that month, Kirby’s Human Torch story, “Prisoner of the 5th Dimension!” in Strange Tales #103, and Don Heck’s “Meet Mr. Meek!” in Tales of Suspense #36. It’s obvious from reading the Kirby story that it’s Kirby’s own plot. Given that Lee’s plot credit is fabricated, did Lieber actually fill in the dialogue? Who plotted the Heck story? Did Lee relay a Kirby plot, or was Heck left to his own devices?

1973 reprints: “The Two-Headed Thing” from Strange Tales #95, April 1962, was reprinted in October 1973’s Monsters on the Prowl #26 and given a set of credits for the first time: Script by Lee, Art by Kirby and Ayers. Lee was not involved the first time around. If bogus credits were going to be added, wouldn’t this be the time to mention Lieber?

Atlas/Seaboard CV: “What’s Happening at Atlas: A Letter from Larry Lieber,” editor introduction, July 1975 issues of Atlas/Seaboard comics.

Lee was fired: 30 July 1998, according to court documents from Lee’s 2002 suit against Marvel, and J.C. Lee’s 2019 suit against Marvel.

a visible presence at his side: Lee first encountered Lieberman in 1970 when Marvel acquired the rights to Conan. In True Believer, Abraham Riesman goes into detail about how the relationship developed after Lieberman helped Lee negotiate a new contract with Marvel.

Thomas swung into action: Roy Thomas, “A Fantastic First! The Creation of the Fantastic Four—and Beyond!,” Alter Ego Vol 2 #2, Summer 1998; “Stan the Man & Roy the Boy: A Conversation Between Stan Lee and Roy Thomas,” Comic Book Artist #2, Summer 1998.

absolutely false: “Stan the Man & Roy the Boy: A Conversation Between Stan Lee and Roy Thomas,” Comic Book Artist #2, Summer 1998.
Roy: Now, skipping ahead to 1961: The story has often been told of this infamous, legendary golf game with Martin Goodman and [DC President] Jack Liebowitz in which Liebowitz bragged about the sales of Justice League of America, and Goodman came back and told you to start a super-hero book. Was that story really true?
Stan: That’s absolutely true. He came in to see me one day and said, “I’ve just been playing golf with Jack Liebowitz”—they were pretty friendly—and he said, “Jack was telling me the Justice League is selling very well, and why don’t we do a book about a group of super-heroes?” That’s how we happened to do Fantastic Four.

Lee had no involvement: Lee’s signature might have been his method to document which pages qualified for his writing page rate. The month prior to FF #1, he made edits to Kirby’s pre-written dialogue on “Fin Fang Foom” (a Kirby story through and through). His changes are visible on the original art, yet he didn’t consider these edits sufficient to warrant his signature as the writer, on that particular story, or on any Kirby story dating back to 1958. The very same month, he signed no fewer than seven paper doll pages, 128 distinct paper doll page signatures between 1957 and 1962. Why was he reluctant to sign the Kirby story, yet free to sign Al Hartley’s “Patsy’s Fashion Cut-Out!” in Patsy Walker #97 or Stan Goldberg’s “Kathy’s Cut-out” in Kathy #13 the same month? The irony is that historian Thomas insists that Lee was capable of conceiving and writing the one he didn’t sign.
Lee admitted to the page rate in one of his depositions.
STAN LEE: I received a salary which paid me as Editor and Art Director, but I got paid on a freelance basis for the stories that I wrote.
Q. And when you say you were paid on a freelance basis, how were you paid? On what basis?
STAN LEE: The same as every other writer. I was paid per page, so much money per page of script.
—Stan Lee deposition, 13 May 2010, Justia, Dockets & Filings, Second Circuit, New York, New York Southern District Court, Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Filing 102, Exhibit 1.

Thomas interviewed Lieber: “A Conversation with Artist-Writer Larry Lieber,” interviewed by Roy Thomas, Alter Ego Vol 3 #2, Fall 1999.

adding dialogue: Every one of Thomas’ captions about Lieber in the article is carefully worded to restrict Lieber’s contribution to added dialogue, even on panels from stories where Lieber claimed he wrote full scripts.

2010 deposition: Lee gave two depositions in the case Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Case Number 1:2010cv00141 (S.D.N.Y. 2011), one on 13 May 2010, and one on 8 December 2010. They are visible online with many pages redacted. Justia, Dockets & Filings, Second Circuit, New York, New York Southern District Court, Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Filing 65, Exhibit 1, and Filing 102, Exhibit I.

Lee and Thomas doubled down: Within a year of the settlement that called Kirby a co-creator, Lee and Thomas were interviewed for Brian Hiatt’s 29 April 2015 article, “Stan Lee on the Incredible Hulk’s Path to ‘Age of Ultron’: Marvel Comics legend and writer/Ultron creator Roy Thomas offer history lessons on heroes and villains,” rollingstone.com.
[Interviewer]: What do you think is a fair way to describe Jack Kirby’s role in the creation and evolution of the Hulk?
[Thomas]: Well, even if Stan came up with the name and the general concept, Jack still contributed a lot — plus, of course, he came up with exactly what the character looked like. Even if Stan kind of described him as a Frankenstein-ian kind of monster, it’s still the artist who contributes a lot by deciding what that means. And I’m sure Jack contributed a lot of story elements as well.

mandated changes: Mike Gartland did a series called “A Failure to Communicate” for The Jack Kirby Collector, examining a number of examples of the jarring changes to Kirby’s stories that were demanded by Lee. Subsequently posted online at The Kirby Effect: The Journal of the Jack Kirby Museum & Research Center.

“Lee never wrote…”: Steve Ditko, “He Giveth and He Taketh Away,” The Avenging Mind, © 2008 S. Ditko.

“I had no script”: Jack Kirby interviewed by Claudio Piccinini at SDCC 1991, Comics Interview #121, June 1993.

Daniel Keyes: Interviewed by Will Murray, Alter Ego #13, March 2002, Keyes was the author of Flowers for Algernon, and story editor under managing editor Lee in the early 1950s.

Stan Goldberg: Interviewed by Jim Amash, Alter Ego v3 #18, October 2002.

Dick Ayers: Barry Pearl, “The Yancy Street Gang visits Dick & Lindy Ayers,” Alter Ego #90, December 2009.

Wallace Wood: from Mark Evanier’s interview with Wallace Wood, posted to Kirby-L, the Jack Kirby Internet mailing list, 5 July 1997, later published in The Life and Legend of Wallace Wood Volume 1, edited by Bhob Stewart and Michael Catron, Fantagraphics, 2016.

Conventional wisdom: The conventional wisdom says Lee was more involved and doing more plotting in the early years, before Kirby resorted to margin notes to convey the story to Lee. This disregards the physical evidence that Kirby wrote his full script in the balloons and captions for the first three years of his Marvel experience (and continued to do so in titles that didn’t yet fall under Lee’s after-the-fact dialogue). Chris Tolworthy, in his excellent book, The Lost Jack Kirby Stories, clearly shows Kirby was firmly in control of the direction of the first collaboration, The Fantastic Four, until he turned in his pages for the eighth issue. Lee took control with his #8 synopsis, and Kirby’s dark science fiction stories were replaced with light-hearted fun and a corresponding loss of creativity. Also ignored by the conventional wisdom are the reasons Kirby resorted to margin notes: to reduce face-to-fave meetings with Lee in the office, and to spell out the story clearly in an attempt to reduce deliberate misunderstandings.

A cursory glance: Stan Taylor, “Spider-Man: The Case for Kirby,” 2003. Posted online at The Kirby Effect: The Journal of the Jack Kirby Museum & Research Center.

“And if all others…”: George Orwell, Nineteen Eighty-Four, Martin Secker & Warburg Ltd, 1949.

“Considering that…”: Stan Lee, Fantastic Four #3 LOC page, cover date March 1962.

paper doll pages: At Marvel during the 1958-late 1961 period Lee showed no interest in the various monster-mystery-fantasy titles being published by Goodman. Available sales records and Goodman’s publication history suggest those titles were buoying Goodman’s line at that time. In October of 1961 (same month as FF #1) Lee begins to show an interest in the genres by signing stories involving Steve Ditko and then taking over a title (Amazing Adventures) and making it (Amazing Fantasy) a showcase for the Lee-Ditko tales. After Lee took over the title sold poorly and was cancelled. Around the same time Lee began not only signing the Lee-Ditko stories (but no others in the genres) but began to systematically remove/cover up the “Kirby & Ayers” signatures on many stories signed that way by Ayers. Lee also began placing blurb promotions for Lee-Ditko stories on front covers drawn by Jack Kirby. And Lee began text editing stories by Kirby and others which Lee didn’t sign.
1. Lee uninterested in science fiction fantasy.
2. Goodman’s science fiction and fantasy titles are increased from bi-monthy to monthly indicating better sales.
3. Lee begins to sign Ditko fantasy-science fiction stories in October of 1961. The same month as Fantastic Four #1.
4. Lee takes over an entire title with Ditko doing all the artwork and covers. The title does not sell and is cancelled.
5. Lee begins to promote the Lee-Ditko stories on the covers of science fiction-fantasy titles drawn by Jack Kirby.
6. Lee begins to cover with white paint the Kirby & Ayers signatures added by Ayers.
This suggests to me that Lee saw the sort of thing Lee wanted to write was not selling. Lee made a move to insert himself into the genres which were making money. Lee probably sensing that Kirby was being identified with Goodman’s science fiction and fantasy titles begins to place his own name on covers by Kirby and removing Kirby’s name where it had been placed by Ayers.
—Patrick Ford, Marvel Method group, 9 February 2021.

painting out: After the Atlas Implosion from 1958-1960 almost all stories published by Goodman were signed. Ditko, Sinnott, Colan, Ayers, Reinman, Heck, all signed their stories. Kirby was the exception. Kirby didn’t sign anything. In 1959 Ayers began inking Kirby. Prior to that Kirby was inked by Reinman, Rule, Klein, Ditko and Sinnott. When Ayers began inking Kirby he signed the stories Kirby & Ayers. That went on very consistently for up until early 1961 when Lee began covering the Kirby and Ayers signatures with white paint. All stories not by Kirby continued to carry signatures. Only the Kirby and Ayers signature was painted over. Lee even went so far as to remove Kirby and Ayers signatures in reprints from stories which had carried the signature when first published.
—Patrick Ford, Marvel Method group, 7 January 2022.
So… regarding those Kirby / Ayers signatures… I always put the signatures on our work together just as I always sign my work. I noticed that the ‘whiteouts’ were happening and it sure didn’t make me happy for I usually had the signature as part of the composition of the drawing. It was a sore point. I’m not keen on the credit boxes that are added to the drawing and confuse the composition of my drawing.
—Dick Ayers, Kirby-L, the Jack Kirby Internet mailing list, 8 December 1998.

letters page shenanigans: Lee finally gave Wood a chance at the writing pay for Daredevil #10, but criticized the writing relentlessly in captions and on the letters pages in #10 and #11. Wood was relieved of the writing pay for #11, the second of two parts, although of course he was plotting and writing since #5 without pay.

Not Stan’s fault: Roy Thomas, ‘”There Are Lies… And Damn Lies…” And Then, Apparently, There’s STAN LEE! A “Book Report” On The Controversial Biography By ABRAHAM RIESMAN,’ Alter Ego #171, September 2021.

bestowed plot credits: Aside from himself, Lee granted printed plot credits to Ayers, Ditko, Adkins, and Lieber. Even if Lee had left a title, when Kirby was assigned to that title doing pencils or layouts, Lee returned to take writing or plot credit.

“Some of the things…”: Stan Lee recorded by Steve Duin, “The Back Story on Stan Lee vs. Jack Kirby,” The Oregonian/OregonLive, 26 June 2011.

he didn’t understand it: Roy Thomas interviewed by Matt Herring, conducted in August 2017, published in The Jack Kirby Collector #74, Spring 2018.
HERRING: …what were your thoughts of seeing Jack’s work at DC?
THOMAS: …I was still in awe of Jack, you know? Despite the fact that I had hit the wall with that New Gods stuff and everything.

“Jack Kirby’s writing…”: Michael Royer, Marvel Method group, 10 December 2021.

“What a lot of people…”: Darrell Epp, Twitter, 25 December 2021.

“Kirby’s writing is rife…”: Doug Harvey, Art Issues #61, January/February 2000. The article can be read online at dougharvey.la.

misinformation: Joe Brancatelli and Charles Rozanski have written columns about the fraud that was taking place in comics distribution in the early 1970s. Robert Beerbohm, in excerpts from his upcoming book, Comic Book Store Wars, gives a riveting account from the dealer’s perspective of what was happening behind the scenes.
The Kirby Fourth World books were phenom sellers. It’s just that [National Periodical Publications] did not see the money inside the distributor pipeline. New Gods and Forever People were ‘HOT’ big time sellers down in the [independent distributor] system of 900 or so wholesale outlets at the time. I remember the comicons back in 1970 71 72 73 awash with unopened cases of the Kirby books. Likewise with Adams GL/GA. The mail order guys advertising in Marvel classifieds and places like RBCC TBG etc had them also stocked in depth. Due to the affidavit return ‘honor system’ fraud rampant by the 70s the NYC publishers were not seeing the sales dollars. Mister Miracle was not on the ”hit” list with most the spec buyers back in the day. Neither was Jimmy Olsen back then. More bucks and energy were being poured in to Forever People and New Gods.
—Robert L. Beerbohm, “Secret Origins of the Direct Market,” Part One, Comic Book Artist #6, Fall 1999, and Part Two, Comic Book Artist #7, February 2000.

“For many years…”: Kirby interviewed by James Van Hise, “A Talk with the King,” Comics Feature #44, May 1986.

When it became evident: Jack and Roz Kirby interviewed by Gary Groth, conducted in summer of 1989, The Comics Journal #134, February 1990.
GROTH: Did you find that fulfilling?
KIRBY: Of course it was fulfilling. It was a happy time of life. But. But, slowly management suddenly realized I was making money. I say “management,” but I mean an individual. I was making more money than he was, OK? It’s an individual. And so he says, “Well, you know…” And the old phrase is born. “Screw you. I get mine.” OK? And so I had to render to Caesar what he considered Caesar’s. And there was a man who never wrote a line in his life — he could hardly spell — you know, taking credit for the writing. I found myself coming up with new angles to keep afloat. I was in a bad spot. I was in a spot that I didn’t want to be in and yet I had to be to make a living.

For more like this, take a look at my first book, Chris Tolworthy’s book, and the Marvel Method group.

Chronology of a Myth

There’s little reason to doubt Larry [Lieber]’s account, as he is explicit about how little he cares about his comics career and is never eager to claim credit for anything. I ask Larry whether Kirby came up with the initial stories without any input from Stan; he replies, “Maybe he did. See, I was never there when the two of them were there.” We simply don’t know conclusively how involved Kirby was, as a writer, in the sci-fi comics of 1958 to 1961.
—Abraham Riesman, True Believer

There was every reason.
—George Smiley to Peter Guillam

Roy Thomas is the custodian of what he calls the “received history,” an alternate timeline of early Marvel. In his recent “rebuttal” of True Believer, he took author Abraham Riesman to task for conducting his own research rather than parroting the received history. In the book, Riesman had failed to quote a 1999 interview by Thomas in which Larry Lieber claimed  to have always written full scripts for the “artists.” Instead, Riesman had interviewed Lieber himself, along with Thomas and many others. Among them, only Lieber was a primary source regarding the years 1958 to 1965—Thomas was not there.

Thomas’ “rebuttal” featured a list of several of the book’s Lieber quotes, each with a corresponding dismissal by Thomas insinuating Lieber was falsely represented. He needn’t have bothered: Riesman recorded his many hours of interviews. Thomas could have tried a more professional approach and simply requested the recordings, but the the litany of disputed quotes was meant to intimidate Lieber for breaking the Marvel NDA. The 90-year-old writer/artist, one of very few Marvel employees still living who were around at the time, is now involved in legal action with Marvel and unlikely to comment further.

Let’s take a look at the evolution of Lieber’s role in the alternate history.

In 1968, Perfect Film & Chemical purchased Marvel, and quickly realized that it would be necessary to conceal the fact that the intellectual property had all sprung from the mind of a freelancer. The company’s nominee to counter this, Stan Lee, often complained that he did not enjoy writing, but he was a salaried employee who couldn’t assert rights to the properties. A born salesman, he eagerly stepped into the role for which he’d prepared his entire life, the front man for the creation of the comic characters. Lee kicked off the campaign by showing Thomas, his future Chief Propagandist, a typewritten page of his own comments in response to part of Kirby’s submission for what would become Fantastic Four #1.

The following year in his Cartoonist Profiles #4 interview, Lee floated the tale that his wife Joan inspired him to create the FF. The same year, Kirby was interviewed by Mark Hebert.

TCJ: After Fighting American, you went to Marvel and did fantasy stories with monsters and predictable endings.

KIRBY: You still had an audience for that kind of thing.

In 1970, Stan Lee was considered by many to be the industry’s buffoon. Jack Kirby finally stopped allowing Lee to take his writing pay, and quit. Marvel and Lee seized on the opportunity to publicize the alternate, false history.

By 1974, the non-existent credits or signatures on the pre-hero monster stories gave Lee the opportunity to claim creative input on the work. That way his “writing” on Kirby’s FF would come as a smooth segue rather than highlighting the reality of the situation, that it was a thing he had never done before.

1974: Origins of Marvel Comics

Let me take you back to 1961. It’s been twenty-two years since I first started with Timely, and I’m still editor, art director, and head writer there. At the moment, the trend is monster stories, so we’re turning out a pandemonious plethora of BEMs and scaly-skinned scaries. Jack Kirby, he of Captain America fame when I first started at Timely, had long since left and then recently returned to the fold as out top artist. Jack and I were having a ball turning out monster stories… Yep, there we were blithely grinding out our merry little monster yarns.

To be accurate, 1961 was twenty years, not twenty-two, since Lee first started with Timely (although the extra two years does bestow a certain cachet). The fantasy/sf books were the realm of other editors, and he was not involved in the so-called superhero revival of 1953-54 (Human Torch, Sub-Mariner, Captain America), not having written a superhero story since 1942. He implicitly denied his involvement in Kirby’s monster stories at the time by omitting his signature. Just prior to the debut of the Fantastic Four, that signature signaled his participation (as “writer”) in Rawhide Kid, Kathy, Gunsmoke Western, Love Romances, Linda Carter Student Nurse, Patsy Walker, Life with Millie, Kid Colt Outlaw, and Millie the Model.

Martin Goodman was canceling the titles in Lee’s preferred dumb blonde genre (“teen humour” as it’s euphemized) and replacing them with superheroes. Outside of the FF, the Hulk, and Spider-Man, Lee resisted the transition, delegating the dialoguing of Thor, Iron Man, and Ant Man to brother Larry Lieber and others. Meanwhile he was happy to continue as the mastermind behind these titles until their demise or their delegation to another writer: Linda Carter (1963), Kathy (1964), Life With Millie/Modeling With Millie, Patsy Walker, Patsy and Hedy (all 1965). He continued with Millie the Model or its 1969 spin-off Mad About Millie until he retired from writing in 1972.

Kirby again mentions monster books in a 1982 interview with Will Eisner.

KIRBY: I began to do monster books. The kind of books Goodman wanted. I had to fight for the superheroes. In other words, I was at the stage now where I had to fight for those things and I did. I had to regenerate the entire line. I felt that there was nobody there that was qualified to do it. So I began to do it. Stan Lee was my vehicle to do it. He was my bridge to Martin [Goodman].

For Jack Kirby Collector 77 (Summer 2019), Will Murray updated an article from 1984. The rewrite was very different from the original.

1984: “I Remember… Vandoom, Master of Marvel Monsters”

Will Murray, Comics Collector #3, Spring 1984.

In truth, it wasn’t until 1959 that the real Marvel Monsters began appearing. Marvel at the time was on shaky ground, its super-heroes long gone, it was sustained by the likes of Kid Colt, Outlaw, Millie the Model, and a number of colorless supernatural titles written by Stan Lee and others and drawn by a train of forgotten artists. A company purge in the summer of 1957 killed off most of the supernatural titles, including the company’s first title, Marvel Tales.

Then Jack Kirby wandered over from DC, where he had created Challengers of the Unknown, and began doing some of the science-fiction stories for Strange Tales (which went back to 1951) and Tales to Astonish (launched January 1959)… Stan Lee never showed this kind of imagination in his pre-1959 script , so I would guess it was Kirby, whose mother was born near Transylvania and told him some pretty wild legends when he was a kid, on whose doorstep we can lay the credit–or blame.

The article mentions the names of Lee, Kirby, Ditko, Ayers, Heck, Sinnott, Reinman, Goodman, and thirty-six separate monsters. The name Larry Lieber does not appear once.

1989: The TCJ Kirby interview

GROTH: When you went to Marvel in ’58 and ’59, Stan was obviously there.
KIRBY: Yes, and he was the same way.
GROTH: And you two collaborated on all the monster stories?
KIRBY: Stan Lee and I never collaborated on anything! I’ve never seen Stan Lee write anything. I used to write the stories just like I always did.
GROTH: On all the monster stories it says “Stan Lee and Jack Kirby.” What did he do to warrant his name being on them?
KIRBY: Nothing! OK?
GROTH: Did he dialogue them?
KIRBY: No, I dialogued them. If Stan Lee ever got a thing dialogued, he would get it from someone working in the office. I would write out the whole story on the back of every page. I would write the dialogue on the back or a description of what was going on. Then Stan Lee would hand them to some guy and he would write in the dialogue. In this way Stan Lee made more pay than he did as an editor. This is the way Stan Lee became the writer. Besides collecting the editor’s pay, he collected writer’s pay. I’m not saying Stan Lee had a bad business head on. I think he took advantage of whoever was working for him.

GROTH: Stan wrote, “Jack and I were having a ball turning out monster stories.” Were you having a ball. Jack?
KIRBY: Stan Lee was having the ball.

Stan Lee wrote whatever he signed, because he signed everything he wrote!
—Will Murray

Groth was mistaken when he said, “On all the monster stories it says ‘Stan Lee and Jack Kirby.’” Stan Lee didn’t sign a single one of Kirby’s fantasy/science-fiction stories, ever (Kirby’s involvement in the genre lasted from 1958 to 1962). Lee didn’t “write” a monster book before 1961 when he signed one of Ditko’s, and he never signed one of Kirby’s.

Kirby’s death presented Lee with the opportunity to regain control of the narrative. Coincidentally, Will Murray stumbled into an interview with Larry Lieber that caused him to reconsider his beliefs.

1995: “Monster Master”

Will Murray, Comics Scene #52, September 1995.

The company was reeling under a distribution crisis that led to a severe implosion of titles in 1957. For months, Atlas tottered on the brink. Then in 1958, Jack Kirby returned to the bullpen and publisher Martin Goodman approved a modest expansion.

There was one problem: editor Stan Lee, having laid off his entire writing staff, could not handle the increased workload. He needed a new writer, someone trainable with a fresh approach.

This is false. Lee was at most writing the teen and western books, Kirby was his own writing crew, and pre-implosion inventory was exhausted at different times in each genre. Michael Vassallo details the sequence of events in his comprehensive Lee retrospective.

Enter Larry Lieber, just out of the Air Force and studying at the Art Student’s League while he sorted out his future. “I felt I had to learn a living,” Lieber recalls. “I wasn’t fast enough at drawing comics. I said, ‘I don’t know how to write them.’ He said, ‘You can write. I read your letters in the service.’ He taught me to write. That’s when I started writing Journey into Mystery, Tales of Suspense and Tales to Astonish.”

This is Lieber’s only comment regarding the timing, and it’s vague.

For years, it has been unclear how many of those [pre-superhero] stories Lee actually wrote. [Hint: it’s a round number.] The answer is deceptively simple: Stan Lee wrote whatever he signed, because he signed everything he wrote!

In the days before The Fantastic Four, it was Lieber’s job to keep Kirby in scripts. Because there were no credits at that time, readers didn’t know–and rarely realize today–that it was Lieber who wrote virtually all those giant monster stories. He remembers it as a very hectic period.

It’s Murray who backdates Lieber’s “writing” to the time of Kirby’s arrival and the very beginning of the monster stories. From Vassallo’s blog post: “Larry Lieber stated decades later he was writing scripts but I believe these were scripts based off Kirby’s already plotted stories. There is absolutely no reason whatsoever that Jack Kirby would need monster stories plotted for him.”

Lieber later confirmed in True Believer that the only reason he believed all the plots given him were Lee’s was that’s what Lee had told him.

Key take-away: Jack Kirby was so fast!

“Jack Kirby was so fast! He could draw about six pages a day, and I was very slow as a writer. So, I was always hurrying to feed Kirby stories. I remember, one Saturday night, running to the post office on 42nd Street, which was open on Saturday, and getting a story out to Jack. ‘Whew! Oh boy, now he’ll have a story!’ Jack would just turn that stuff out, and he was drawing all the monsters.”

Other key take-away: Lieber tips his hand

All rumors to the contrary, Lieber verifies that Lee does indeed script King Features’ Spider-Man. “Stan writes a very thorough script,” he says. “What he didn’t do with Kirby and the others, he’s doing with me. It’s almost the opposite. It’s filled with descriptions. You know–the guy is leaving the room and with his left hand he’s putting on his hat, and his right hand he’s putting down the telephone, and the girl looks up sadly, etc. He’s writing it like a movie script almost.”

The last bit is the giveaway. The Spider-Man newspaper strip was ghost-written for Lee by Jim Shooter from the start, and would be afterward for 17-plus years by Roy Thomas. “What he didn’t do with Kirby and the others, he’s doing with me” is Lieber telegraphing to Murray that the interview content is fabricated, or a cry for help from the coerced brother. Murray remains oblivious.

It would be interesting to hear from Murray how the Lieber scoop fell into his lap in 1995, but asking seems futile. A glance at the preview for the next Kirby Collector shows that he’s invested in the false narrative and John Morrow is letting him run with it. Examples from his two articles in that issue: “Kirby merely designed the [Iron Man] costume,” and “[Martin] Goodman instructed editor-writer Stan Lee to package a super-hero title…”

Lieber’s Wikipedia page (citing the Official Index to the Marvel Universe #14) says his first script was a Heck story in 1960 for Strange Tales, and his first script for Kirby ran in Amazing Adventures in 1961. With no credits or signatures, these claims bear the designation “attributed” or “confirmed” to disguise the fact that they’re pulled out of the air. The underlying motivation for Lee/Lieber credit creep is the false claim that Kirby wasn’t doing his own writing, an essential premise of the received history. More recently, lawyers have had their way in the latest Marvel reprints and IDW Artist’s Editions, which credit Lee and Lieber with all of Kirby’s writing.

Three years after Murray’s Lieber article, Thomas had a “conversation” with Stan Lee for Comic Book Artist.

1998: “Stan the Man & Roy the Boy”

A Conversation Between Stan Lee and Roy Thomas, Comic Book Artist #2, Summer 1998, online here.

Roy: That’s the period when Jack Kirby came back to Marvel. Jack mentioned in an interview [in The Comics Journal #136][sic] that he came to work offering his services when people were literally moving out the furniture. Do you recall that?

Stan: I never remember being there when people were moving out the furniture. [chuckles] If they ever moved the furniture, they did it during the weekend when everybody was home. Jack tended toward hyperbole, just like the time he was quoted as saying that he came in and I was crying and I said, “Please save the company!” I’m not a crier and I would never have said that. I was very happy that Jack was there and I loved working with him, but I never cried to him. [laughs]

In fact, Martin Goodman shut down his comics operation a number of times between 1958 and 1961, once coinciding with the death of Lee’s closest collaborator Joe Maneely and another time coinciding with the cancellation of Lee’s newspaper strip, Willie Lumpkin. Thomas twists the story, contending that Goodman repeatedly considered Lee worthy of another chance, rather than being convinced by Kirby and his ability to sell comics. If this were the case, Lee’s operation wouldn’t have been subject to multiple shutdowns in the first place.

With the hyperbole remark, Lee is projecting. He tones down his own propensity toward pathological lying in order to train the accusation on Kirby.

Roy: By Fantastic Four #1, you had developed what later came to be called “the Marvel style.” But you were doing this all along for some monster stories, some time before this. How far back does that go?

Stan: You mean just doing synopses for the artists? Was I doing them before Marvel?

Roy: I know that you did it for Fantastic Four. So I figured with Jack as the artist—and maybe Ditko, too—in these minor stories that you mostly wrote, along with Larry Lieber, you must have been doing it since the monster days.

Stan: You know something, Roy? Now that you say it, that’s probably true; but I had never thought of that. I thought that I started it with the Fantastic Four, but you’re probably right.

At its heart, the Marvel Method is the kickback scheme by which Lee took the writing rate of his “artists” in exchange for continued assignments. The need to backdate it is driven by the fact that Jack Kirby was being paid for writing and pencilling his pre-hero work, something Lee decided he needed to tap into.

Roy Thomas makes a false entry in the historical record

Roy: You probably didn’t write full scripts for Jack for “Fin Fang Foom.”

Stan: I did full scripts in the beginning, but then I found out how good he was just creating his own little sequence of pictures—and I did it in the beginning with Ditko, too—but when I found out how good they were, I realized that, “Gee, I don’t have to do it—I get a better story by just letting them run free.”

Although he admitted he never did after 1961, there is little evidence Lee wrote full scripts for anyone at any time during the 1950s. Story editors who reported to him, Al Sulman and particularly Daniel Keyes, painted Lee as someone who trafficked in the scripts of others. When he says, “I did full scripts in the beginning,” perhaps he’s referring to just after the departure of Simon and Kirby in 1941.

Here’s how Michael Vassallo describes the period in his Stan Lee retrospective: “About a dozen years ago I picked Stan Lee’s memory about his earliest years at Timely. His notoriously bad memory was not in fact a reality. I learned that if you asked him about particular things like stories, credits, etc, he didn’t really have any definite answers mainly because he was supervising up to 50 titles a month, doing some writing on the side, assigning work, dictating one-line plots to writers under him, and overall producing a product that he didn’t give more than a passing thought about. But if you nailed him down to particular people and events, he recalled a lot in full clarity.”

In the “conversation,” Thomas had an agenda, while Lee showed all the signs of just playing along.

Thomas’ interview agenda
  1. Kirby’s TCJ interview
  2. The FF synopsis/the Marvel Method
  3. The golf story
  4. It’s “well known”: Lieber wrote dialogue from Lee plots
Lee’s interview agenda
  1. Overcoming things Martin hates to get Spider-Man published
  2. (At length): working from home three days a week is not all fun and games as people suppose, but hard work when you hate writing
  3. Lee finds writing comics the easiest thing in the world (contradicting #2) while Mario Puzo tries and fails
  4. (At length): union-busting the Academy of Comic Book Arts before it gets started

The agenda would become the talking points of Thomas’ subsequent career as valet to Lee’s legacy.

Key take-away: Lieber was “never the fastest” writer

Roy: …In the early days, it’s now well known that Larry Lieber, your brother, wrote the dialogue for a number of stories, after they were plotted by you and drawn by Jack or whoever, on some series like “Thor” and “Iron Man.”

Stan: Well, it’s in the credits and I always put his name in. If not, I’d say, “Plot by Stan Lee.” Larry definitely did the first “Thor,” and he may have written the copy for “Iron Man.” What I did was give him the plot and he wrote it.

Roy: Was it that you were just too busy, or did you just think that it wasn’t that important that you do the dialogue?

Stan: Both. And you know that both “Thor” and “Iron Man” were only 10-, 11-page stories and not a feature book. I was very busy and I liked the way that Larry wrote, and so I thought I’d give him a shot at it.

Roy: The mere fact that people assumed for years afterward that you did the dialogue shows that he imitated your style pretty well. The thing with Larry is that he was just a little slow.

Stan: He was like Romita; he was never the fastest one.

Other take-away: “Now that you say it, that’s probably true”

Roy: I know that you did it [i.e. wrote “Marvel style”] for Fantastic Four. So I figured with Jack as the artist—and maybe Ditko, too—in these minor stories that you mostly wrote, along with Larry Lieber, you must have been doing it since the monster days.

Stan: You know something, Roy? Now that you say it, that’s probably true; but I had never thought of that. I thought that I started it with the Fantastic Four, but you’re probably right.

Taken in context, this staged interview shows a disconnect from the previous staged interview. Now that Thomas is in charge of the narrative, Lee’s previous gambit (Lieber wrote all of the full scripts for everyone) goes out the window. Larry Lieber is mentioned once in the context of the monster stories “writing” by synopsis for Kirby and Ditko, the kind of writing that Lieber denied doing at all. Lee has no recollection of calling it the Marvel Method before FF #1: Thomas is the only one here suggesting anyone wrote Kirby’s pre-hero stories.

Next, the Alter Ego interview cited by Thomas, wherein Thomas adds Lieber back into the narrative.

1999: “A Conversation with Artist-Writer Larry Lieber”

Alter Ego Vol 3 No 2, Autumn 1999, excerpted here.

RT: When the comics were just getting started up again.

Lieber: Well, they were putting out… let’s see… Journey into Mystery… Tales to Astonish…. At the time I had a room in Tudor City, and I was writing stories for Jack to draw. Jack was so fast, and I was learning to write. You can appreciate this, I’m sure: I didn’t really know how, and Stan was giving me a writing course!

…I remember that Kirby was so fast he could draw faster than I was writing! Stan would say to me, “Jack needs another script!” I was on 41st, and I used to sit there Saturday and Sunday, and there was the Grand Central Post Office that was open all the time.

RT: You mentioned earlier that Stan would say to you, “Jack needs a story now.” Did you plot some of those lead monster stories, as well?

Lieber: No. Stan made up the plot, and then he’d give it to me, and I’d write the script. Tudor City had a park; and when it was nice, I’d sit there and break the story down picture by picture. I was unsure of myself just sitting down to write a script. Since I knew how to draw, I’d think, “Oh, this shot will have a guy coming this way… this shot we’ll have a guy looking down on him,” and later I’d sit at the typewriter and type it up. After a while, I’d just go to the typewriter. I would follow from Stan’s plots.

RT: Would Jack have already penciled the story?

Lieber: No. These were all scripts in advance.

RT: So this wasn’t “Marvel style” yet? I asked Stan recently just how that style started. He felt maybe Fantastic Four #1 was the start of it, but I wondered if, by 1961 and before, he was already doing some things plots-in-advance for Jack and others.

Lieber: No, I think it started with Fantastic Four, or around the time he did the super-heroes.

RT: So you’d turn Stan’s plots into a full script for Jack or whoever?

Lieber: Or for Don Heck, or someone. Stan liked writing his own stories for Ditko. Jack I always had to send a full script to.

What’s notable about the interview?

In his True Believer “rebuttal,” Thomas cites Lieber’s claim that he always wrote full scripts. During the original interview, Lieber himself could scarcely believe the claims he was being asked to make because “Jack was so fast…” Someone else present for the interview doesn’t believe him either: Roy Thomas. Here’s one of Thomas’ captions from the interview…

Note that every caption is carefully worded to restrict Lieber’s contribution to dialogue, even on panels from stories where Lieber claimed he wrote full scripts.

Roy Thomas makes another false entry in the historical record

There are no credits or signatures. Thomas suggests it’s anybody’s guess who wrote the dialogue, therefore it was probably Lieber.

Lieber sets Thomas straight on the fact that the Marvel Method began with FF #1. Were there assigned plots before that? Undoubtedly, but what distinguishes the Marvel Method is its key innovation, the theft of the writing pay.

2011: Larry Lieber’s deposition

Let’s give Larry Lieber the last word. Not the nice guy with no dog in the fight, but as he described in his deposition in the Kirby case, the bullied little brother who agreed to be deposed under threat of losing his livelihood. Lieber actually seemed to be under the impression that he was testifying under oath.

Larry Lieber had no contact with a script’s prospective recipient. His sole point of contact, his only source of information about office business, was Stan Lee. Like Thomas and his one-sided history of Marvel, Lieber got his version of events from Lee, and only from Lee.

The Vandoom article appeared in 1984. Ten years before that, there was Stan Lee claiming he had a ball with Kirby doing the monster stories. Before that there was nothing, because it was uncontroversial: no one had a reason to question the authorship of the stories. The original art pages have Kirby’s pencilled lettering in the balloons and captions, with an occasional in-office edit on later stories by Lee who was nominally the editor. There is no physical evidence for Lieber scripts.

In response to the TCJ interview where Kirby claimed, “I created; I wrote,” Lee said Kirby “either lost his mind or he’s a very evil person.” Once Kirby was dead, Lee could control the narrative, and he re-mobilized his propaganda machine.

By all accounts Larry Lieber is a nice guy, and for those invested in the false narrative it’s a sufficient reason for taking his word over Kirby’s. True Believer gives us a very different picture of Lieber than the one we had. He’s a timid man treated like a stranger by his brother (who himself owed everything to nepotism), and susceptible to his brother’s coercion. Seen in context, the 1995 interview with Will Murray could only be the result of that coercion.

KIRBY: Stan was a very rigid type. At least, he is to me. That’s how I sized him up. He’s a very rigid type, and he gets what he wants when the advantage is his. He’s the kind of a guy who will play the advantages. When the advantage isn’t his at all, he’ll lose. He’ll lose with any creative guy. And I could never see Stan Lee as being creative.

Roy Thomas and the physical evidence

This was done as a sidebar to my earlier post, but required an extra click. Here it is as its own post.

Some Roy Thomas statements from the recent past that are contradicted by the physical evidence…

Daredevil

Thomas: Sure, [Lee] let Wally Wood dialogue a single Daredevil issue; but he was unhappy with the results (as I learned when I came to work there, soon after Wood quit). I can appreciate Wood’s being unhappy to be acknowledged only as the “artist” in the credits, so that he moved on—but Stan was so obviously enamored of Wood’s talent that, if Wood had really pushed the point, Stan might well have made the same type of arrangement with him that he’d done first with Ditko, then with Kirby.1

Arrangement? Thomas seems to believe that Ditko and Kirby were consulted on having their writing pay extorted. Wood made it clear to Lee that the “arrangement” Lee had with Ditko and Kirby was not acceptable to him, and he had his pencilling assignment removed by Lee.

Wood told Mark Evanier, “remember that issue of DAREDEVIL I wrote? Stan said it was hopeless and that he’d have to rewrite the whole thing. Then I saw it when it came out and he’d changed five words, less than an editor usually changes.”2

Thomas needs to familiarize himself with the physical evidence before repeating this fairy tale. The original art to several pages of the story is visible at the Heritage site, and it’s obvious that the changes Lee ordered were minor.

Nick Fury

Thomas: But Stan felt that he himself needed to provide the actual finished dialogue for the stories. When Jack dialogued a “S.H.I.E.L.D.” episode while Stan was out of town, Stan, upon returning, was vocally unhappy with the dialogue (if then-production manager Sol Brodsky was still alive, he’d back me up on this) and hurriedly rewrote as much of it as he had time to do… and far more than poor, long-suffering, deadline-hounded, budget-conscious Sol wanted him to. and from the caption, Roy T. recalls The Man as actually doing extensive rewrites upon his return; in the end, he just didn’t want to take credit or blame for his part in a story whose writing he didn’t much care for. Surprisingly, it’s unusually difficult to detect the rewritten balloons and captions, which suggests that production manager Sol Brodsky may have called credited letterer Sam Rosen into the Marvel offices to handle Stan’s re-do. Or maybe Sol talked Stan out of doing quite as much rewriting as Roy knows he wanted. How conveniently worded: “if the evidence doesn’t bear out my ‘recollection,’ I’ll say Sol talked him out of it.”3

Vocally unhappy? Let’s take a look at the evidence…

Jim MacKay: Artie Simek did the [front page] bottom caption and credits (“SAM ROSEN” was lettered by Simek), and relettered a few word balloons elsewhere in the story. If that was Stan Lee’s contribution when he returned from vacation, it amounted to 1 or 2 percent of the dialogue. Certainly not “extensive rewriting.”4

Lee’s contribution to this panel: “SAWBONES.”

Don’t take Jim MacKay’s word for it… the pages of the SHIELD story (Strange Tales #148) can be viewed online.

Black Panther

Thomas’ editorial in Alter Ego 118 introduces Arlen Schumer’s Black Panther piece, responding to Arlen’s implication that Kirby created the character.

“Still, as I’ve told Arlen, I feel obliged to state up front that I have reservations about one of his key assumptions—namely that, because Jack Kirby’s drawing of a Panther-like character called The Coal Tiger (probably) pre-dates FF #51, it can be inferred that the idea of introducing a black super-hero into Marvel’s flagship title was necessarily Jack’s rather than Stan’s… To presume that Jack rather than Stan was the initiator of The Black Panther ignores the fact that Stan had long been instructing Marvel’s artists to include African-Americans in crowd scenes. I’ve no proof the impetus for a black super-hero came from Stan—but one can’t automatically assume it came from Jack, either. It’s equally possible that Stan came up with the idea, maybe even the name “Black Panther”—and if and when he did, there right in front of him was Jack with his very un-African “Coal Tiger” concept drawing (since there ain’t no tigers in Africa)…”

I’ve detailed elsewhere how Kirby came up with Coal Tiger based on current events: Patrice Lumumba, the Katangan Tigers. Thomas’ portrayal of Stan Lee the civil rights pioneer is belied by the fact that the initial cover appearance was altered from Kirby’s original partial mask to a full mask to conceal the character’s race, his skin was coloured grey inside the book (lampooned by Alan Moore in the series 1963), and Kirby’s greatest storyline was cancelled because of someone’s discomfort with the character (see Chris Tolworthy’s The Lost Jack Kirby Stories, p 54). Thomas may also want to check out the April 1969 Stan’s Soapbox, with Lee’s shout-out to the Jolly John Birchers.

John Romita: I remember asking [Jack] about The Black Panther. He said that was from some storyline he’d worked on for years, that he loved the idea of a black hero like that. He loved mythology. So if there was an African mythology, then he was going to latch onto it, just like he practically lived in Norse mythology. When he did the “Thor” stuff, he was in his own backyard. He loved those characters so much. He lived and died with them. African mythology was one of his pet projects, and he told me he loved the idea of The Black Panther being a royal African with a 500-year history, and things like that.5

Romita reveals that Kirby had developed a backstory, which Tolworthy covers in detail in Lost Stories. This calls to mind John Severin’s late ’50s discussion with Kirby about the roots of Sgt Fury. Stan Lee never spoke in terms of motivations of the characters he allegedly created.

Thomas’ most telling comment on the creation of the character came in 1986, before his conversion experience to Team Lee: “I came in at the beginning of what I consider the height of the ’65 period when Jack Kirby was introducing the Inhumans, the Black Panther and others.”6

Surfer

That Stan Lee was the co-creator, and not the sole creator, of the key Marvel heroes from the Fantastic Four and Spider-Man through Daredevil and the Silver Surfer can hardly be in dispute at this late stage.

Caption: Roy recalls, however, that it was Stan who turned the black-&-white-penciled entity (called by Jack simply “the Surfer” in his margin notes) into The Silver Surfer when he dialogued the issue.7

That Stan Lee was the co-creator (or less) needed to be restated every time Lee or Thomas opened their mouths. The Surfer was an unfortunate choice to illustrate this.

Daniel Greenberg: Lee made a stab at actually writing a comic with the Silver Surfer title he had promised to Kirby (before backstabbing the actual creator of the Surfer by taking it from him).

Despite all the elements for success—Marvel’s hottest new character in the Silver Surfer, Marvel’s best new artist in John Buscema, Marvel’s most prestige format, and Stan Lee’s alleged gift for hype, the book was a huge disappointment to fans and a failure on the newsstands. Why?

The writing.

Surfer stories written by Jack Kirby are flashes of brilliance so intense they erupt from the page, from his clashes with Doom, Quasimodo, etc. Marvel caught lightning in a bottle.

Surfer stories written by Stan “Shakespeare” Lee turn the Surfer into a mopey, petty, inconsistent, vacillating, emo whose soliloquies reveal nothing about his inner world other than odious self-pity.

No wonder the fans rejected the book. Simply imitating the form of a Hamlet soliloquy means nothing without Shakespeare’s penetrating look into the human psyche.8

Greg Theakston wrote in Jack Magic, Volume 2 that Kirby phoned him on the occasion of what might have been the last straw. To add insult to the injury of starting a Surfer solo book without its creator, Lee had taken the Surfer away from Buscema so he could bring Kirby in for an issue to try to save the title. Buscema insisted on doing Thor to replace the hole in his schedule and Lee capitulated, again ripping something away from Kirby that he’d created without asking.

Thomas was the witness to Kirby’s sole creatorship of the character.

ROY: Yet from the very beginning, he’s always been clear that Jack invented the Silver Surfer, and just tossed him into a story where Stan had not suggested any character like that. I know for a fact, having seen the pages in pencil when they came in, that the character was just called “The Surfer” in the border notes, not “The Silver Surfer.” The name “Silver Surfer” at the very least was Stan’s, and the speech patterns.

TJKC: In that period, when Marvel introduced the Inhumans, Galactus, and the Black Panther, would you say those were all co-creations, or did Jack come in like he did with the Silver Surfer and say, “Stan, I have these characters”?

ROY: From what little I heard talking to Stan and Sol Brodsky, the Silver Surfer was kind of an exception, although there may have been a few villains that were created by Jack. I think Stan had an initial idea for quite a few of them, but I wouldn’t say that there couldn’t be some individual characters that Jack didn’t come up with the idea for.9

If only Jack…

In his Alter Ego 161 response to my letter, Thomas called into question the existence of statements by Kirby and Ditko.

Thomas: Now, if Jack himself said at some point that he wrote that story, dialogue and all, that would definitely be worth considering. But traces of his penciled balloons and captions on original “Foom” art merely indicate he pencil-lettered it when he drew it, not that he’d written the original script.

“If Jack himself said at some point,” it would be dismissed like everything else Jack himself said because it couldn’t co-exist with the “received history.” In fact, Kirby himself did comment, and here it is.

GROTH: When you went to Marvel in ’58 and ’59, Stan was obviously there.
KIRBY: Yes, and he was the same way [a pest].
GROTH: And you two collaborated on all the monster stories?
KIRBY: Stan Lee and I never collaborated on anything! I’ve never seen Stan Lee write anything. I used to write the [monster] stories just like I always did.10

It seems odd that Thomas is unaware of Kirby’s claim in the TCJ interview, since the Stan-Roy “interview”11 was scripted to address, point by point, the TCJ interview, and Kirby’s monster claim in particular.

If only Ditko…

Thomas: As for your statement that “Ditko quit… because Stan wasn’t speaking to him”… well, maybe that’s the reason, and maybe it wasn’t. Do you have a quote from Steve specifically stating that? Because Steve had other, and, he felt, better reasons for leaving, I’m sure… and in any event, he went on working for Marvel for a year or so after the two men stopped speaking.12

Ditko was forthcoming and transparent: Thomas might want to make note of his essays in Robin Snyder’s The Comics, including a 15+-part Mini History of Marvel, the 2008 32-pager, The Avenging Mind focusing on Marvel, Lee, and Goodman, and “WHY I QUIT S-M, MARVEL” in Four Page Series No. 9, September 2015 containing these words of Ditko’s: “Why should I continue to do all these monthly issues, original story ideas, material, for a man who is too scared, too angry over something, to even see, talk to me?”

Footnotes

back 1 Roy Thomas, response to my letter, Alter Ego #161, November 2019.

back 2 Mark Evanier’s interview with Wallace Wood, posted to Kirby-L, the Jack Kirby Internet mailing list, 5 July 1997, published in The Life and Legend of Wallace Wood Volume 1, edited by Bhob Stewart and Michael Catron, Fantagraphics, 2016.

back 3 Roy Thomas, response to my letter, Alter Ego #161, November 2019.

back 4 Jim MacKay, Marvel Method group, 15 December 2019.

back 5 John Romita interviewed by Jim Amash, John Romita… And All That Jazz!, TwoMorrows Publishing, July 2007.

back 6 “Roy Thomas: Looking Back on the Golden Age,” Comics Feature 44, May 1986.

back 7 Roy Thomas, ‘“There Are Lies… And Damn Lies…” And Then, Apparently, There’s STAN LEE! A “Book Report” On The Controversial Biography By ABRAHAM RIESMAN,’ Alter Ego 171, September 2021.

back 8 Daniel Greenberg, Marvel Method group, 7 Sep 2021.

back 9 Roy Thomas interviewed by Jim Amash, conducted by phone in September 1997, published in The Jack Kirby Collector #18, January 1998.

back 10 Jack Kirby interviewed by Gary Groth, conducted in summer of 1989, The Comics Journal #134, February 1990.

back 11 “Stan the Man & Roy the Boy,” A Conversation Between Stan Lee and Roy Thomas, Comic Book Artist #2, Summer 1998.

back 12 Roy Thomas, response to my letter, Alter Ego #161, November 2019.

Guardian of the Mythology

Roy Thomas (smiling gleefully): When Jerry [Robinson]’s article about what Bill Finger had done on Batman came out of course it made Bob Kane go ballistic the minute that he saw it. So he went to the editor of Batmania, and he wrote half a dozen pages of diatribe. Obviously Bob Kane did not want Bill Finger’s story told and took tremendous offense at it.1

The reaction of Roy Thomas to Bob Kane’s dismay at the exposure of his credit theft is telling. Thomas has made it his life’s work to suppress awareness of the same charges against Stan Lee, and to that end, he continues to discredit the Bill Fingers in Lee’s life. Compared to Lee, Kane was an amateur, because he was actually naïve enough to pay his uncredited collaborators for their work.

In Alter Ego 171, Thomas spells out the current state of the ever-evolving company version of Lee vs Kirby. The framework he uses this time is the expansion of his “rebuttal” of Abraham Riesman’s True Believer: The Rise and Fall of Stan Lee (the original piece appeared in The Hollywood Reporter in February). Thomas shows he has little use for logic, and absolute contempt for the physical evidence. The article reveals the difficulty of maintaining a false narrative in the face of scrutiny from the outside world.

Thomas’ complaints in the “rebuttal” boil down to this:

I feel the chief transgression of this book is how the author goes so far out of his way to undermine much of the received history and biography of Stan Lee.

The “received history” consists of various publicity campaigns in which Thomas was instrumental. These propaganda blitzes served to falsify the events of the ’60s and the late ’50s to give the company clear title to properties created by freelancers.

Unless specified with a footnote, the indented passages herein are taken from ‘“There Are Lies… And Damn Lies…” And Then, Apparently, There’s STAN LEE! A “Book Report” On The Controversial Biography By ABRAHAM RIESMAN,’ by Roy Thomas. Quotes within those passages are taken by Thomas from True Believer: The Rise and Fall of Stan Lee, by Abraham Riesman.

In Alter Ego 161, an earlier defense by Thomas of the company line on Kirby consisted wholly of

it’s well known…2

What’s well known? Thomas was suggesting it’s well known that Larry Lieber wrote full scripts for Kirby’s monster comics based on Lee’s plots. This is taken to be “well known” because it appeared in the pages of Alter Ego, 22 years ago. What’s with the fixation of finding some way, any way, to deny Kirby the writing credit he claimed? The answer is simple: if it became known that Kirby was a writer, his “collaborations” with Lee might be subject to more scrutiny.

Jack Kirby always claimed he wrote his own monster stories, but the official line as of 1974 was that Stan Lee wrote them. When that became problematic in 1999, the torch was passed and Larry Lieber was nominated.3

In 1997, Thomas told Jim Amash how he researched his second-hand history for the years that preceded his arrival at Marvel in 1965.

From what little I heard talking to Stan and Sol Brodsky…4

The freelancers might tell a different story, so it was safer not to consult them. By the time Alter Ego 161 was published in 2019, it was clear that Thomas was still ignoring the claims of Kirby and Ditko.

Alas, Mr Riesman is a journalist, and unlike lifelong industry fans like Thomas or hagiographers like Danny Fingeroth, he was compelled to throw out the “received history” and do the research from scratch. Apparently Thomas will need to learn the hard way not to contest Riesman on the grounds of research or documentation.

A chronology of making up history

The “received history” was developed in four stages. In 1961, as Larry Lieber once commented,5 Stan Lee decided to “write” Kirby’s comics; more on this later. Thomas started with the company in 1965, so this is the only stage for which he was not present and has no first-hand knowledge.

Between 1968 and 1974, Marvel’s new owners had a narrative established for them to consolidate control of the copyrights away from the freelancers who created the properties, culminating in Origins of Marvel Comics under Lee’s byline. In later decades, Lee is known to have had ghostwriters for everything; Origins might be no exception to the pattern. Kirby commented in his TCJ interview that Lee even had ghostwriters for his 1960s dialogue. A look further back in his career shows Lee recycling other people’s scripts under his own name, yet it was Kirby’s remark that drew outrage.

In 1998, in response to two events—Kirby’s death and the interview of Thomas that appeared in the Kirby Collector—Thomas was recruited by Lee and his attorney Arthur Lieberman to join the campaign. (Lieberman had entered the lives of Lee and Thomas in 1970 at the advent of one of Thomas’ greatest creations, Conan the Barbarian.) By the time of the Stan-Roy “interview”  in Comic Book Artist that year, Thomas was directing the effort.

Stan: You know something, Roy? Now that you say it, that’s probably true…6

Finally, in a 2010 deposition in the case in which Marvel sued the Kirby family, with Lieberman at his side, Lee laid claim to sole creatorship of all the contested properties. In addition, that pesky Silver Surfer, not yet a contested property but a counterexample to the idea that Lee created all, was dispensed with by his legal team. Thanks to the presence of Thomas at the unveiling, Kirby had clear title, but in the deposition Lee became co-creator by virtue of making it “a separate character.” Thomas, formerly the only witness against, takes the opportunity in his “rebuttal” to incorporate this new truth in the narrative.

Discerning the truth

Some excerpts from the Thomas “rebuttal,” with Riesman’s work in quotes:

Both men were, I think, wrong… and that’s why Riesman is so ill-advised to use nearly every opportunity he gets to weight things in Jack’s favor and against Stan.

You think I’m exaggerating when I suggest that Riesman finds gratuitous excuses to favor Jack’s vision of things over Stan’s? I’m not.

He simply weighs Stan’s statements against Jack’s, without offering any real evidence that Jack’s memories are any more reliable than Stan’s.

“It’s very possible, maybe even probable, that the characters and plots Stan was famous for all sprang from the brain and pen of [artist writer Jack] Kirby….” “Possible,” yes. Lots of things are “possible.” But—“even probable”? Why? Riesman never really makes a credible case for that. He merely piles up verbiage and quotations: “He said… he said.”

Over and over again in the book—there isn’t room here to list them all—Riesman attempts to undercut Stan’s veracity.

“It was just two men in a room. Kirby relentlessly claimed until his dying day that his discussions were merely a matter of his telling Stan what was going to happen in a given plot, then going home and creating what he’d said he would create….” But hey—guess what: Stan Lee proclaimed to his dying day that he had had the initial idea for most of the 1960s Marvel heroes, with Jack being brought in later to help develop those characters. So why are we supposed to believe one man’s claim and not the other’s, given the lack of hard evidence?

Lee’s veracity can’t be undercut; he seldom told the truth. There is physical evidence, and in denying its existence, Thomas is hoping it will go away. Thomas says Lee was wrong, therefore by the “fine people” principle both men were wrong. No one will remember Thomas admitting Lee was wrong; Thomas won’t even remember for the duration of his article.

Bad memory, aka lying as a default setting

One of the things people have to realize about Stan Lee is that, like many another busy, forward-looking professional… he tended to discard (i.e., forget) events or discussions even in the recent past, once they were over and done with. That aspect of Stan’s personality could be maddening at times, but the fact remains: Stan was, in many ways, almost as forgetful as he generally portrayed himself as being. From the day I met him in 1965, he walked around with 3”x5” note cards in his shirt pocket, on which he’d scribble down things because he didn’t trust his memory. And, while some have argued that his “poor memory” was only a convenient shield against being held responsible for earlier decisions, I feel I spent more than enough time working with him between ’65 and ’74, in particular, to be certain that his notoriously bad memory was way more than just an artful dodge.

[Riesman] simply weighs Stan’s statements against Jack’s, without offering any real evidence that Jack’s memories are any more reliable than Stan’s.

Some people (Steve Ditko in particular) have suggested that poor memory is a reason to not be taken seriously when claiming creator credit. Lee repeatedly claimed “the world’s worst memory” and the like. Kirby never said he had a poor memory, yet propagandists like Thomas insist the unreliability is on both sides before saying their side is telling the truth. In 1986 Kirby said he and Lee both remembered clearly the events of 25 years earlier, and all that was necessary was for Lee to come clean. He expressed confidence that, knowing Lee, that would never happen.

Synopses

And [Riesman] weights things toward Jack’s view point with statements like the foregoing despite the fact, for instance, that partial synopses written by Stan for two of the first eight issues of the crucial Marvel flagship title Fantastic Four (including for #1) have been vouched for as existing since the 1960s.

Synopsis is a misnomer for the items promoted by Thomas as Lee’s documents of creation. Presumably typed by Lee, Chris Tolworthy shows convincingly that they were notes that suggested edits to the stories Kirby had turned in. The representation of the “synopses” as documents of creation, a view Thomas took up only after expressing his skepticism in 1997, is fraudulent.

“…I saw Stan’s plot for Fantastic Four #1, but even Stan would never claim for sure that he and Jack hadn’t talked the idea over before he wrote this.”7

The first “synopsis” to emerge (the one for #8) changed the direction of the Fantastic Four from Kirby’s dark science fiction to Lee’s light and fluffy. (Kirby wrestled control back some 40 issues later.)

If Stan Lee was engaging in an act of ex post facto forgery with that half-synopsis, it was surely the most inept attempt ever seen by man. And Stan was far from inept.

Thomas offers no evidence for this statement, because the “received history” is not about a Stan Lee who was inept. The physical evidence tells a different story.

Mark Evanier: [ FF #1] feels an awful lot more like Jack’s earlier work than anything that Stan had done to that date. So I find it very difficult to believe that Jack did not have input into the creation of the characters prior to the – that synopsis, whenever it was composed. And, also, I have the fact that I talked to Stan many times, and he told me – and he said it in print in a few places – that he and Jack had sat down one day and figured out what the Fantastic Four would be.

QUINN. And they discussed the plot before they actually – the drawings were done?

A. They discussed the plot before the alleged synopsis was done also.8

Amusing bit: Riesman wrote that “a rumor” said the FF #1 synopsis was created after the fact. Thomas refers to Evanier, one source of the rumor, as Kirby’s “one-time teenage assistant.” When Lee made Evanier a Vice President of Stan Lee Media, Thomas was having his loyalty rewarded by being handed the ghostwriting duties on the Spider-Man newspaper strip. Lee was paid $125k a year for having the strip written, but it’s a safe bet Thomas only got a fraction of that. Thomas exacts his revenge on Evanier with the “teenage assistant” crack, not realizing that it might bring to mind Kirby’s first teenage assistant, Stan Lee.

Lieber

Riesman even manages either to misunderstand Stan’s brother Larry Lieber on the way many of the early Marvel stories were written—or else, back in 1999, Larry himself was totally misremembering when he told me in a published interview that, to the best of his recollection, every single story he wrote was done in the script-in-advance format, never by the Marvel Method.

Riesman can’t misunderstand something that is insufficiently documented. Kirby said he wrote his own stories. Lieber has always been very malleable in the hands of his big brother whom, it’s clear in the pages of True Believer, treated him like dirt. Lieber’s name wasn’t mentioned in relation to Kirby’s stories before 1998, and he didn’t claim to have written full scripts for Kirby until after Kirby’s death.

In 2011 Lieber was deposed in the Kirby case, and mentioned that he’d been reluctant to give the deposition. Lee convinced him with the “suggestion” that if he didn’t, he might lose his work on the Spider-Man newspaper strip, work he had at the whim of Lee (see page 30 in the linked PDF).

Case No. 11-3333 Appellants’ Opening Brief

Lieber also described his understanding of what would happen to a script after he turned it in.

MS. SINGER. Do you know what would happen to the script after Stan went over it and made whatever changes?
LIEBER. Yeah. It would be sent to the artist, I would guess.
Q. Okay.
A. Whether it was, you know, the various artists, yeah.
Q. Did you ever — did you have any contact with the story after
you turned it in and made whatever changes?
A. No.9

Thomas notes a couple of points in the book that Lieber later asked to be clarified. Thomas calls it Riesman’s “misinformation.”

Through his friend Frank Lovece, Larry has recently corrected this bit of misinformation on Facebook.

According to Larry in his recent remarks put on Facebook by his friend Frank Lovece, it was his older cousin-by-marriage Martin Goodman who committed that particular verbal vulgarity…

Lovece is a reporter beholden to the Marvel narrative, but Riesman recorded his interviews.

Thomas then expresses disbelief at a few things Lieber said to Riesman.

This is something I’d definitely need to check with Larry himself about before I believed it

…but again, I’d want to hear that description from his own lips.

Again, it’s not that the lead-off pair of statements made by Riesman are necessarily untruths… I wasn’t in the room to hear precisely what Larry told him, and neither were you… but I’d want to hear it from Larry before I didn’t believe that he was, at the very least, misquoted.

Despite his rhetoric, Thomas will never check with Lieber because that kind of poking the actual first-hand accounts is not his style. He’s not a journalist or even an historian. Abraham Riesman not only checked with Lieber, but recorded his lengthy reminiscences. If Thomas were to approach Lieber, the implicit threat of his Marvel affiliation would precede him, and Lieber would alter his story accordingly.

Who was Stan Lee?

“‘When my mother died, our life changed dramatically.’ The change was not born of grief but rather of logistics.”

More of the same as on p. 14, really… this time, a quotation from Stan, followed by a judgment by Riesman. But perhaps, rather than criticize the author, we should all simply marvel at his ability to look inside the mind and heart of Stan Lee and know precisely what he meant by that quote, when the man was known for playing his emotional cards very close to his vest.

Jack Kirby always had the clearest view of his former teenage assistant. In this case he pegged it: Lee was a man with no empathy.

KIRBY: And my wife was present when I created these damn characters. The only reason I would have any bad feelings against Stan is because my own wife had to suffer through that with me. It takes a guy like Stan, without feeling, to realize a thing like that. If he hurts a guy, he also hurts his family. His wife is going ask questions. His children are going to ask questions.10

Freedland

It’s curious that Thomas, who hasn’t hesitated to spin Lee as the injured party in the Herald Tribune debacle, neglects to mention one of the exclusive revelations of True Believer: Riesman interviewed Nat Freedland. Freedland admitted to Riesman that he’d been sucking up to Lee in hopes of getting work with Marvel. This is notable because Thomas has tried to whitewash the incident in the past.

THOMAS: And, unfortunately, Stan kind of took the rap for [the tone of the article] from Jack and Roz, who somehow felt that Stan was trying to grab credit away from him, and though Stan could do that, he wasn’t doing that in this instance.11

Thomas is wrong: Lee was very much trying to grab credit. The purpose of staging the “plotting session” was to present Lee as the originator of the ideas. Thomas knew the story conference was atypical by the very fact that he was invited to attend.

Physical evidence

Stan Taylor: The problem here is not that we don’t have eyewitness testimony, it’s that we have conflicting eyewitness testimony. The people involved disagree. If we can’t rely on first-person testimony, what can we do? Criminal detectives have other words for this: evidence, and modus operandi. We can do what historians, detectives, and scientists have always done: ignore the hearsay, mythology, and personal claims and look at the actual physical evidence, in this case, the original comic books, and contemporaneous documentary evidence from unbiased sources. Human behavior is repetitive, we all have our m.o, — our method of operation. It is this human trait that detectives use to narrow down the lists of suspects in any mystery.12

What comprises the physical evidence? The published comics are the main source, but there’s more. Kirby’s original art from the monster and early superhero period (visible online and in IDW Artist’s Editions) contains his pencilled lettering in the balloons and captions of stories where the writing has been retroactively credited to others. Kirby said in interviews that his documents of creation were a “blitz” of concept sketches that he used to present his characters on spec. Most of these have been absorbed into the published work, as cover figures like Iron Man, or Marvel Masterworks posters like the FF. At least one Spider-Man page and a pair of Nick Fury pages, however, survived long enough to be discussed. Taylor used the physical evidence, mainly the published work attributed to Lee, Kirby, and Ditko, to make a convincing case for Kirby bringing the Spider-Man character and plots to Stan Lee before the first story conference.

Physical evidence of a JLA prototype.

On the other side of the ledger, there are no surviving scripts (although Thomas devotes two pages of the article to a “Marvel Method script” from the ’70s that involved neither Lee nor Kirby). There are two “synopses” that may have been Lee’s attempt to change the direction of what Kirby had already written and drawn. The only physical evidence for writing, including the absence of Lee’s signatures, favours Kirby.

Kirby writing full script with panel breakdowns, writing pay taken by Lee.

Roy Thomas’ attitude toward the physical evidence is troubling. While in the Marvel offices, Jim Shooter encountered a Kirby Spider-Man presentation page, and Jim Steranko was assigned Kirby’s Nick Fury presentation pages to ink. Thomas was closer to that evidence than nearly everyone else for fifteen years. After expressing doubt regarding the timing of the FF #1 “synopsis” in a 1997 interview, he was persuaded the following year to embrace and extend the Lee creation myth.

Some examples of recent Thomas pronouncements that don’t stand up to the physical evidence are detailed here.

Audience

Caption: Frankly, Ye Editor finds it ludicrous that anyone would believe that Stan would’ve bothered to fake such a document [an FF outline] anytime… but especially back in the 1960s!

Thomas mocks the Riesman/Evanier “synopsis” takedown for the benefit of his audience. “Ye Editor” is an inside joke, a fun way for adults to secretly signal each other based on Lee’s cod Shakespeare.

Caption: When Stan and Jack Made “True Believers” Of Nearly All Of Us

It was not Kirby’s goal to make True Believers, it was his goal to tell an entertaining story and sell comics. Lee’s rebirth in the ’60s on the backs of his collaborators came with the realization that if he befriended his readers, he could make them enemies of anyone who called out his managerial abuses.

…in any subsequent edition, Crown Books should change the book’s subtitle. Because he isn’t likely to have convinced anyone who has access to (or interest in) any facts or intelligent observations that lie outside its pages.

“Come to Alter Ego to get all the facts and intelligent observations.” The magazine may run a Jack Kirby tribute issue, but it will never show him respect because he disrespected the flag of Stan Lee. The special brand loyalty to which it caters values the characters above the creators, and their friend in management (Lee) over labour (the freelancers).

But, no matter how well the Random House publicity machine manages to hype this book, as long as it stands as currently published, with Stan all but written off as an inveterate liar whose most important creation was his public persona (when it was actually the concept and direction of the Marvel Universe, an idea that was anathema to Jack Kirby, as per in-book quotes), it will remain undeserving of the high praise heaped upon it by people who, for the most part, don’t really know what the hell they’re talking about.

“People who don’t read Alter Ego don’t really know what the hell they’re talking about.” Thomas sidesteps having to prove Lee is not an inveterate liar with the implication that the “received history” answers all.

Propaganda

Michael J Vassallo: reading Stan Lee: How Marvel Changed the World, by Adrian Mackinder. Another book on Stan, mining the same rubbish. The prologue to the book is not inaccurate as it goes into great length explaining how Stan was positioning himself as a pseudo-military leader of the legion of Marvel fans. Phrases like “face front’” and “True Believer,” makes it obvious the author knows Stan was organizing a cult following. As the author said, “They didn’t just read. They believed.”13

Having served in the US Army Signal Corps during WWII, Lee was aware of the power of propaganda. If it could ever be said that he’d read a book (like Trump and his bedside copy of Mein Kampf), it would be The True Believer: Thoughts on the Nature of Mass Movements.

Mark Seifert commented on a blog post about Jean Shepherd’s trademark use of the word “Excelsior.”

Mark Seifert: I’ve been researching the usage of “Excelsior” word by Marvel Comics legend Stan Lee. There too, there have been widespread claims that it doesn’t really mean much. And some that claim that Stan got it from Shepherd (he didn’t, we’ll get to that in a minute). But it does have specific meaning, as you say. Fwiw, I can give you a little additional context, I believe.

First off: Like Shepherd, Stan Lee was in the Signal Corps during WW2. After the war and their service, I believe they were both engaged in a little Cold War era propaganda as well. I’m not necessarily implying that’s a bad thing (that’s above my pay grade!), but their usage of it was very certainly purposeful and with specific intent.

Keep going. Achieve. Don’t let anything stop you.

In Stan’s case, as you might know, he also uses the terms “True Believer” and “Face Front” frequently. Both of these had gained relatively common usage as terms of propaganda in that era.

“True Believer” a very popular book about the psychology of mass movements by Eric Hoffer in the 1950s, also had a cover on the paperback version which shows a man climbing upward with the classic “Excelsior” banner.

“Face Front” was thrust into usage in that era by syndicated newspaper columnist George Matthew Adams, which a little research shows ran a syndicate that frequently engaged in propaganda. Its meaning is pretty close to the meaning of Excelsior. Basically: stand up, together, and face the enemy.

These are all terms of the trade of mass influence, and in the case of Excelsior, being used regularly by trained Signal Corps veterans who both had access to a mass audience.

In my opinion, there are conclusions to be drawn from that.14

The True Believer: Thoughts on the Nature of Mass Movements, 1951

Some excerpts.
Page numbers are taken from the Harper Perennial Modern Classics edition, 2019.

p 50 A rising mass movement attracts and holds a following not by its doctrine and promises but by the refuge it offers from the anxieties, barrenness and meaninglessness of an individual existence. It cures the poignantly frustrated not by conferring on them an absolute truth or by remedying the difficulties and abuses which made their lives miserable, but by freeing them from their ineffectual selves–and it does this by enfolding and absorbing them into a closely knit and exultant corporate whole.

p 130 Propaganda by itself succeeds mainly with the frustrated. Their throbbing fears, hopes and passions crowd at the portals of their senses and get between them and the outside world. They cannot see but what they have already imagined, and it is the music of their own souls they hear in the impassioned words of the propagandist. Indeed, it it easier for the frustrated to detect their own imaginings and hear the echo of their own musings in impassioned double-talk and sonorous refrains that in precise words joined together with faultless logic.

p 131 [Dr Goebbels] sounds apologetic when he claims that “it cannot be denied that more can be done with good propaganda than by no propaganda at all.”

p 155 …the true believer who is wholly assimilated into a compact collective body has found a new identity and a new life. He is one of the chosen, bolstered and protected by invincible powers, and destined to inherit the earth… The true believer is eternally incomplete, eternally insecure.

p 173 The genuine man of words himself can get along without faith in absolutes. He values the search for truth as much as truth itself. He delights in the clash of thought and in the give-and-take of controversy. If he formulates a philosophy and a doctrine, they are more an exhibition of brilliance and an exercise in dialectics than a program of action and the tenets of a faith. His vanity, it is true, often prompts him to defend his speculations with savagery and even venom; but his appeal is usually to reason and not to faith. The fanatics and the faith-hungry masses, however, are likely to invest such speculations with the certitude of holy writ, and make them the fountainhead of a new faith.

p 175 However, the freedom the masses crave is not freedom of self-expression and self-realization, but freedom from the intolerable burden of an autonomous existence. They want freedom from “the fearful burden of free choice,” freedom from the arduous responsibility of realizing their ineffectual selves and shouldering the blame for the blemished product. They do not want freedom of conscience, but faith–blind, authoritarian faith.

Lee’s True Believers aside, this 70-year-old book has echoes in current events that are alarming.

Lee took to heart a strategy attributed to Goebbels15 in his dealings with Kirby, joking with the True Believers about Kirby’s greed or incompetence, and in a serious moment, accusing him of evil for disputing the creation mythology. Thomas carries on the tradition: his favourite accusation is that Kirby was greedy because of his belief that he wasn’t fairly compensated for his share of the work.

Thomas includes an exercise in the “rebuttal” in which he proves that in today’s dollars, Kirby’s pay was nothing to sneeze at. He fails to mention Lee’s ill-gotten freelance writing pay on over 10,000 pages Kirby produced, or Kirby’s back-breaking 7-day schedule while Lee and Thomas put in a verifiable two to three days in the office. Something else that goes unmentioned is the motivation for Lee’s extortion racket, laid plain in Riesman’s book: the terrible price Lee was paying to keep his wife and daughter in the style to which they were accustomed.

Thomas noted in his 1981 TCJ interview that Marvel was a vindictive company, and that Lee himself could be vindictive on occasion.16 But although his examples of the targets of Lee’s vindictiveness were from the ’70s (Wein and Conway, both writer/editors), he didn’t mention writer/artist Dick Ayers, who sued for reprint fees and lost. Lee stripped Ayers of his assignments and spread the word that he’d had a mental breakdown.

Propaganda in the “rebuttal”

Caption: Fantastic Four #10… Stan Lee and Jack Kirby were shown in their office… trying to come up with a new storyline. In these panels, none other than Dr. Doom waltzes in and takes over… it seems unlikely that Stan would’ve approved such a scene a couple of years later… because it would’ve undermined the reality he was increasingly seeking in the Marvel line.

“The reality [Lee] was increasingly seeking in the Marvel line,” yes, reality in the line of superhero comics is one of those things that needs to be chanted repeatedly, without thinking about what’s being  said.

One of the things people have to realize about Stan Lee is that, like many another busy, forward-looking professional—and Stan was, as my keen-eyed wife Dann put it after a bit of observation, “one of the most future-oriented people” she ever met…

Jack Kirby was a prophet: many accounts (including that of Thomas) talk about his in-person predictions of the future coming true. There are many examples of it in his comic stories. Lee was a follower: Kirby’s account of Marvel’s creation was that Lee was immobilized by his disintegrating career prospects (cancellation of his newspaper strip, shutdown of the comics operation by Goodman), and Kirby stepped in.

“The general public is typically aware of only one narrative of the Marvel revolution: ‘Stan came up with all the characters, plots, and dialogue; Jack just came up with the visuals.’” Actually, if the “general public” knows only the version of events that Riesman paraphrases above, that’s hardly Stan’s fault. First, it’s because the “general public” never read the many, many places in the pages of Marvel’s 1960s comics wherein Stan praised Jack Kirby’s contributions to the skies, often giving him credit for what amounts to co-plotting stories, and on occasion even saying that Jack was likely to come up with a particular story all on his own.

“Not Stan’s fault” is a common theme in Thomas’ retelling, and it’s related to the falsehood that “he never knew why they quit.” It’s “not Stan’s fault” that everyone believes he’s the creator, plotter, writer, and “artist;” if only he hadn’t constantly portrayed himself that way, and had corrected interviewers whenever they got it wrong. It’s “not Stan’s fault” that Kirby and Ditko didn’t make clear their desire to get paid for their work before “stabbing him in the back” and quitting.

At odds with the “not Stan’s fault” line of reasoning are his 1987 interview comment, “the characters’ concepts were mine,”17 and his 2010 deposition,18 wherein he claimed that every creation was his. Lee’s run-of-the-mill propaganda was directed at his readers, but these comments were for general consumption. Thomas, under oath for his own deposition, said Lee misspoke if he ever said “artists” were expected to plot.

Q. Are you aware that Stan Lee, in interviews, has stated that in 1960s, under the Marvel Method, that artists were expected to plot stories?
MS. KLEINICK: Objection; states facts not in evidence.
A. I haven’t any knowledge of that. It would have, you know, surprised me; but if he did, he probably misspoke.19

This leads seamlessly into one of the biggest lies of the “received history”: Lee always praised his collaborators.

[Thomas quotes Lee via Barry Pearl]: “Comicbooks are a collaborative medium. Had I not worked with artists like Jack Kirby, Steve Ditko, John Romita, John Buscema, Gil Kane, all the rest of them, Gene Colan, Syd Shores—yes, Syd Shores, too—Dick Ayers, Joe Sinnott, all those guys… my stories would not have looked as good…. Those guys were writers themselves. But they would write with pictures…. It was a total collaboration affair and sometimes I feel a little guilty, you know: ‘Stan did this, Stan did that.’ I did it, but I did it with them. And they really deserve as much [credit] as I ever get.” You won’t find that quote, in full or in part, in Riesman, either.

Lee often said Kirby was very creative.20 If the actual words are parsed, it can be seen that he never credited him with creating a copyrightable property. Kirby was called a great plotter, but the physical evidence shows that he never received a plot credit. Ditko demanded a plot credit and was stripped of his Hulk assignment (it was given to Kirby so Lee would continue to receive the full writing page rate). Lee didn’t speak to Ditko for over a year, until he finally quit.

It’s important to note that each time Thomas or Lee used the word “artist” to describe Kirby or another one of the writers, it was designed to diminish their contribution and plant the idea that someone else was doing the writing. A better term would be writer/artist, and, in one instance, creator/writer/artist.

Produced by…

…as Riesman’s quotes testify, Stan often—not invariably, but often—gave Jack credit for doing much, even most of the actual plotting. By mid-1966, Stan, eager to accommodate Jack, stopped listing himself as “writer” in the credits and readily agreed to the mutual credit Jack suggested: “Produced by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby.” If Jack wanted still more credit than that, it doesn’t seem he ever made his wishes clearly known to Stan.

The “Produced by” story is one Roy Thomas is fond of telling. Roz Kirby seemed to speak derisively of the wording when she told John Morrow that they asked for credit all the time.21

This time,  Thomas tells the story as fact, but as recently as two years ago, his use of the word “reportedly” reveals that he got it second-hand.

Should Stan perhaps have made some additional accommodation with Jack? The point can be argued—in retrospect, I wish he had—but remember, Stan had reason to believe the matter had been settled to Jack’s satisfaction when the two of them agreed that future stories would be credited as “a Stan Lee & Jack Kirby production,” the phrasing Jack reportedly chose himself.22

Kirby asking for a “Produced by” credit is a Stan Lee story. Mark Evanier contributes to the mythology by relating Lee’s revelation to him that in another magnanimous gesture (the Lee/Thomas version of history is full of them), he offered Kirby and Ditko a plot credit at the same time.23 (It’s not clear from this fairy tale that Ditko was forced to demand it.) In Lee’s telling, Kirby’s response was no, just put “Produced by.”


What puts the lie to this one is, again, the physical evidence: it took Lee from April 8, 1965 (Amazing Spider-Man #26, Ditko’s first plot credit) until August 9, 1966 (FF #56, the first “Produced by” credit) for Lee to give Kirby the credit Lee claims Kirby asked for in lieu of a writing credit, a period of 16 months. What Thomas, Evanier, and Lee fail to mention is that Ditko received plotting pay with his credit, taken out of Lee’s writing page rate. A “Produced by” credit didn’t cost Lee a dime, and still didn’t earn Kirby any pay for his writing.

Backstab

…Stan not only refers to Jack as “one of the greatest artists in the whole world,” but, in the very next sentence, acknowledges that Jack “started most of the characters with me.” Yeah, he’s saying that about the guy who he felt had stabbed him in the back in 1970 when he started working for DC Comics before even bothering to tell him he was quitting, and who had then viciously lampooned him as “Funky Flashman”!

A member of the general public might infer from the circumstances that the matter of stolen writing pay could never have been settled to Kirby’s satisfaction. It’s common knowledge in the outside world that Kirby turned off the tap on new creations after Lee butchered his Cocoon Man story, and began stockpiling concept sketches for his next opportunity. Kirby finally quit after tolerating the Marvel Method for nine years. It’s not a mystery, even though Lee pretended for decades that he didn’t know why. Now Thomas has taken up the mantle.

Vicious? Funky Flashman was undoubtedly the most accurate portrait of Lee we’re ever likely to see, by someone who had worked closely with him but was not beholden to him. Marvel has since outlawed this kind of thing from former employees. Stabbed in the back? Let’s keep in mind that Kirby’s writing pay was extorted for the better part of a decade by the man who, upon Kirby’s departure, immediately began claiming sole creatorship.

Stan Taylor’s approach was to look for patterns. The obvious pattern here is that repetitive Roy Thomas anecdotes concerning Kirby and Lee were designed to conceal something. When a point is belabored in the official version, a little scrutiny should turn up the truth behind it in the form of an accurate Kirby claim.

Conclusion

Abraham Riesman is a journalist. His book is based on new interviews with Lieber, Thomas, Romita, Freedland, O’Neil, and many others. The quotes are accurate because the interviews were recorded. Riesman paid for his own fact checker, publisher Random House paid a separate fact checker, and historian (the real kind, not the Marvel kind) Dr Michael J Vassallo fact checked it. There is no other book about Stan Lee that has been as thoroughly checked against known facts.

Coming back to the “received history,” who is receiving it? The received history is received by the True Believers. Riesman has written a biography for the rest of us, the “general public” who have no use for the company mythology.

I’d like to add a corollary to Stan Taylor’s approach to the first-hand testimony: if the account of one of the people involved is consistently borne out by the evidence, and the other is consistently proven false, it’s appropriate to conclude that the former is a significant contribution to our understanding of the history. That of the latter should be called out at every opportunity.

Footnotes

back 1 The Hulu documentary Batman & Bill, 2017.

back 2 Letters pages, Alter Ego 161, November 2019.

back 3 “A Conversation with Artist-Writer Larry Lieber,” interviewed by Roy Thomas, Alter Ego V3No2, Fall 1999.

back 4 Roy Thomas interviewed by Jim Amash, conducted by phone in September 1997, published in The Jack Kirby Collector #18, January 1998.

back 5 “A Conversation with Artist-Writer Larry Lieber,” interviewed by Roy Thomas, Alter Ego V3No2, Fall 1999.

back 6 “Stan the Man & Roy the Boy,” A Conversation Between Stan Lee and Roy Thomas, Comic Book Artist #2, Summer 1998.

back 7 Roy Thomas interviewed by Jim Amash, conducted by phone in September 1997, published in The Jack Kirby Collector #18, January 1998.

back 8 Mark Evanier deposition, 9 November 2010, Justia, Dockets & Filings, Second Circuit, New York, New York Southern District Court, Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Filing 65, Exhibit 8.

back 9 Larry Lieber deposition, 7 January 2011, Justia, Dockets & Filings, Second Circuit, New York, New York Southern District Court, Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Filing 65, Exhibit 4.

back 10 Jack Kirby interviewed by Gary Groth, conducted in summer of 1989,  The Comics Journal #134, February 1990.

back 11 “The Terrific Roy Thomas,” panel conducted by Matt Herring, The Jack Kirby Collector #74, Spring 2018.

back 12 Stan Taylor, “Spider-Man: The Case for Kirby,” 2003, available at the Kirby Museum website.

back 13 Michael J Vassallo, Marvel Method group, 10 September 2021.

back 14 Mark Seifert, 10 August 2019 comment on the “Jean Shepherd–Excelsior!!!!!” post at Gene Bergmann’s Jean Shepherd Quest blog.

back 15 Accuse the other side of that of which you are guilty, a misquote, according to Wikiquote.org. It’s possibly based on this actual quote: “The cleverest trick used in propaganda against Germany during the war was to accuse Germany of what our enemies themselves were doing.”

back 16 “The thing that was truest in that article [‘Roy Thomas Leaves Marvel,’ Journal #56] was the analysis that Marvel has had a tendency in recent years to be very vindictive toward people who leave it to work for the competition. They go far beyond any kind of professional reaction. Stan generally has reasonably good and humane instincts, but once in a while he’ll just decide that if somebody does something, he’s never going to work for Marvel again. He did this with Len, and with Gerry, though to date he’s never said it about me.”—Roy Thomas, interviewed by Rob Gustaveson, The Comics Journal #61, Winter 1981.

back 17 Janet Bode, A Comic Book Artist KO’d: Jack Kirby’s Six-Year
Slugfest with Marvel, The Village Voice, 8 December 1987.

back 18 Stan Lee deposition, 13 May 2010, Justia, Dockets & Filings, Second Circuit, New York, New York Southern District Court, Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Filing 102, Exhibit 1.

back 19 Roy Thomas deposition, 27 October 2010, Justia, Dockets & Filings, Second Circuit, New York, New York Southern District Court, Marvel Worldwide, Inc. et al v. Kirby et al, Filing 102, Exhibit K.

back 20 “Jack was about the best. He was really the most creative artist of all, because he was more than an artist. I call him a great conceptualizer. He could conceive of stories and follow them through. All I would have to do with Jack is give him a very brief outline on what to do, and he would just do the whole story. After a while when we were rushed, I didn’t even give him an outline, he just did whatever story he wanted and I’d come back and I’d put it in the copy.”—Michael Allen, “Stan ‘The Man’ Lee,” Overstreet’s Comic Book Quarterly Vol 1 #4, April-June 1994.

back 21 When asked if this credits change was the result of Kirby actively asking for it, Jack’s wife insisted: “Of course! He used to ask for it all the time…We always asked for a lot of things all the time, and finally they put down ‘Produced by…’ because it’s just ridiculous, you know.”—Roz Kirby interview conducted 12 December 1995 by John Morrow, The Jack Kirby Collector #10, April 1996.

back 22 Letters pages, Alter Ego 161, November 2019.

back 23 Stan told me something interesting. There was one point in the Spider-Man books when the credits changed from “Art by Steve Ditko” to “plotted and drawn by Steve Ditko…” Stan said that simultaneously he offered the same thing to Kirby— to give him a co-writing credit—and Jack, instead, asked that the credits read “Produced by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby” or some variation of that. If you look at the credits, very rarely after that did it say “Written by Stan Lee.” Jack asked to keep it ambiguous, and Stan went along with it.—Mark Evanier, “Comic Interview,” cited by Barry Pearl in Alter Ego 170, July 2021.

What Kirby wrote


Two years ago, for an audience on social media, Chris Tolworthy dissected “everyone’s favourite” Fantastic Four story, “This Man, This Monster!” His goal was to peel back the layers added by collaborators to Kirby’s finished pages to find the genuine Kirby story underneath. The Facebook post was lengthy and split into several parts, but here’s a taste:

The real monsters are often not the ugly people who see their faults clearly. The real monsters are the handsome people who are either unaware of their faults, or dismiss them for the greater goal. In the FF, Reed frequently hurts his best friend and is not even aware he is doing it. In this story, by seeing two other “monsters” lose everything (one is rejected by his best friend and loses his old life, the other who actually loses his life in Reed’s latest experiment – it was Reed’s faulty cable that broke), Reed finally learns to appreciate Ben: it is the climax of 51 issues.

This was not just a cheap parlour trick. Chris, one of the world’s pre-eminent FF historians, has put together a book of such dissections. From the back cover:

  • The first origin of Dr Doom
  • The lost Hulk #4
  • Who really defeated Galactus?
  • The original Black Widow
  • Ragnarok
  • The first origin of Iron Man
  • Xavier before Cyclops
  • and many more

…and from Chris’ announcement: “This book began as an appendix to my other book (more on that when it’s ready) and that’s how I think of it: a very big appendix. For years people have asked me to put all my crazy Kirby theories into one place. Some of these theories are from my friend James. A few years ago we were contacted by an individual who was able to confirm that at least one of the theories was correct. I cannot guarantee the others, but they are all based on meticulous forensic work, so judge for yourself.”

For those who contend that in the 1960s Marvel Method books, the individual contributions of the collaborators are unknowable, Stan Taylor had this to say:

We can do what historians, detectives, and scientists have always done: ignore the hearsay, mythology, and personal claims and look at the actual physical evidence, in this case, the original comic books, and contemporaneous documentary evidence from unbiased sources. It has been said, “an artist is someone who pounds the same nail over and over again.” All artists, graphic or literary, have patterns. They repeat aspects, concepts, a style of punctuation, a brush stroke, lines of musculature, anything that separates their style from the hundreds of others. When trying to identify an unknown artist, one can compare the piece in question with other contemporaneous works to match up these patterns. This method has been used to research everything from Shakespeare’s writings to the works of the Great Masters.

The nature of Kirby’s collaboration with Stan Lee in most cases allows us to point to a stage in the process that was thoroughly Kirby: when he turned in his pencilled pages on a story. After that, Lee along with the letterer, inker, and other (sometimes accidental) production staff, swung into action and remade the work into the pages that were published. In recent decades, it’s been possible to study Kirby’s notations and pencilled-in dialogue using original art scans that are available online and in the IDW Artist’s Edition volumes. The Lost Jack Kirby Stories provides a new tool for that toolbox.

Jack Kirby was one of the world’s greatest storytellers. Chris spends 170-plus pages proving that some of the stories Kirby intended to tell can be teased out from the noise layered on top. He then teaches the reader to do it for themselves.

Buy it here.

Steve Sherman and Iron Man

I wouldn’t have had a chance to meet Jack Kirby in person. I’ve never been to a convention further from home than the Canadian National Exhibition grounds, and my first trip to California was in 1995, the year after he died. My more recent and more modest ambitions have been to get to a Kirby Museum pop-up in NYC, and to get to a minor convention to see the “History of Jack Kirby” presentation by Mark Badger, Bruce Simon, and Steve Sherman. Sadly, Steve passed away last week.

Steve and Mark Evanier were Jack Kirby’s assistants in the early ’70s, and before the decade was out, Steve was also Kirby’s co-writer on screenplays and the co-creator of Kobra. Steve evidently didn’t have any ambitions to write a book, but if he had, it would have been a book I’d have wanted to read. Steve was humble and always generously forthcoming answering questions, and he was an unflinching advocate for Jack Kirby.

One of Steve’s emails, to Patrick Ford, was quoted in Ferran Delgado’s excellent Sky Masters Sundays book, and was instrumental in the construction of my own book. I reproduce it here:

The thing is, if Joe Maneely hadn’t died, things would have been a lot different. I guess you can call it fate, destiny, random events, but Jack probably would have found something else. Yes it was early ’61 that Goodman was going to pull the plug. Don’t forget, the Marvel offices at the time were pretty small, so it wasn’t a big deal to close the office. I would guess that Goodman had not yet informed the printer or engravers, since that would have been bought ahead of time. I would guess that last issues of the books had been sent out. Jack couldn’t let them close. Jack had always been working on ideas for books. He was pretty well aware of what was being published. He always felt that “superhero” books would make a comeback.

Since Goodman already had the pipeline going, it wasn’t too much to give it another shot, especially since it was Jack. He had come through before, so why not. As Jack told me, he came up with all of the titles at once. He called it a “blitzkrieg”. He felt if he put out a bunch of new books at once, it would make a splash. He had “FF”, “Spider-Man”, “The X-Men” and “Thor” and “Hulk”. You can believe it or not, but that’s what he told me. I think that if you go through all of the interviews with Jack, Stan and countless others, it’s pretty obvious that Stan never came up with a title in his life. It either came from Goodman or someone on staff. I read somewhere that even “Millie the Model” and the other girl comics that Stan takes credit for were thought up by someone else.

Curiously, in the Kirby “tribute” issue of Alter Ego, Will Murray cited Mark Evanier suggesting the same thing. This is curious because it would have had to pass by the editing pen of Roy Thomas (see previous blog posts). Murray’s article is a rework of his Comic Book Marketplace article from 2000, “The Secret Origin of Iron Man.” The Evanier quotes are from the original. Here’s the interesting bit:

The origins of the character are complicated, and many behind-the-scenes details have either never been fully reported or are in dispute. According to Mark Evanier (friend and early-1970s assistant to Jack Kirby), who got the story from the artist himself, Kirby created the character design for Iron Man and brought it to Stan Lee sometime prior to the creation of Thor, Spider-Man, and Ant-Man. If verified, this may date from the period during which he brought in the original version of Spider-Man. Little if any thought was given to who the man inside Iron Man’s bulky armor would be. Kirby’s concept sketch ultimately became the cover to Tales of Suspense #39 (March 1963).

One thing that seems to have escaped Will completely is the source of the plot of the first Iron Man story: it is identical to Kirby’s 1958 Green Arrow story, “The War That Never Ended.” If Murray had to rework a 20-year-old article, why in the world didn’t he cite the Green Arrow plot? In the Alter Ego telling, Kirby’s involvement in the Iron Man origin is restricted to the character design. It becomes clear, however, that if Don Heck got the plot from Lee over the phone, then Lee, as was his MO, was reading said plot straight off of Kirby’s Iron Man concept pages.

Roy Thomas expends a lot of effort in and out of Alter Ego to see to it that Kirby is credited as nothing more than Stan Lee’s artist. It’s fitting that, despite printing an Iron Man creation article that omits the key fact of Iron Man’s creation, Thomas’ tool of Kirby suppression is the source of a 20+-year-old Mark Evanier quote that confirms Steve Sherman’s version of Marvel’s inception.